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spudleyq 
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Registration Date: 23-09-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Welcome to my Carnival' and post your comments here!!!
Need some help with this tune.....maybe some advice on the levels.......advice on making it creepier.......anything you guys can throw at me.......warning......there's no synth in this song!!!
don't tell me it's too slow either.......it's 190 bpm.....it's the 3/4 time that throws you off
This track has been deleted because of copyright violation
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08-12-2004 17:16 |
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spudleyq
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actually 190 beats per minute in 3/4 time is 190 beats per minute in 4/4 time......there's still 190 beats every minute......the reason why you think it's slower is because you're used to hearing that extra beat.......try it.........count in your head while you listen to the song........1-2-3-1-2-3-1-2-3-1-2-3.......it's still hitting 190 times every minute
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08-12-2004 19:38 |
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kareem
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Very original.
Nice atmosphere, but little variation.(but it's not finished.
Like to hear the finished version, it's a whole different style of drum n' bass.
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08-12-2004 20:53 |
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Surora23
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the only reaspm why it sounds slower is because it doesnt have the extra beat in there...my Krator track is 180 bpms but sounds slower in parts because there isnt a constant break going on...
Is this clownstep? dont really know much about or much of a fan of it...I like strait breaks rather than the 3/4 thing...thius would sound dope with some tramens
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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08-12-2004 21:15 |
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spudleyq
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no.......clownstep isn't real.......and any kind of step usally doesn't have a 6/8 time signature.......but yeah.....i'm gonna try to get some tramens in there......it's kinda hard with 6/8 time though
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08-12-2004 23:11 |
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charleskoncept
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WTF ive heard something like this before... man i dont know what the hell but it feels like that intro took forever....
kinda spacey... need to bring it back down a bit... i think its missing a lot of stuff like movement and a point....
its just the same thing over an over again..
sorry just wasnt feelin it...
2/5 peace...
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08-12-2004 23:53 |
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Polar Freq
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scary intro.. nice..
maybe it should last longer just the intro without anything else..
lower the piano and volume up the background alittle bit mor.
great piano
it all fits nicely into the theme
maybe the kick doesent fit so much.. its to clear to be scary
good start of a song... (sorry if i repeated smthn that toherz said i didn t read nothin'
peace
oh yeah i like it but idono i juz can judge only on the intro so again
peace
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09-12-2004 01:07 |
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pharmacite
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yeah..um.
kinda halloweeeeeny eh?
how about finishing the track before you post it
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09-12-2004 08:24 |
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spudleyq
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Originally posted by pharmacite
yeah..um.
kinda halloweeeeeny eh?
how about finishing the track before you post it |
since when does it need to be halloween for an evil carnival song? it's dark in my world all year round!! and if you ask me.....it sounds more like an evil christmas song than a halloween song. I posted it on here unfinished to get some actual feedback......some real help.....like polar freq. gave me......i didn't post it on here so tourists like you could download it and pretend to know what you're talking about 
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09-12-2004 14:36 |
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spudleyq
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Originally posted by charleskoncept
WTF ive heard something like this before... man i dont know what the hell but it feels like that intro took forever....
kinda spacey... need to bring it back down a bit... i think its missing a lot of stuff like movement and a point....
its just the same thing over an over again..
sorry just wasnt feelin it...
2/5 peace... |
are you giving me a 2 based on it being just an intro? or a 2/5 based on an entire song?
and what do mean it's the same thing over and over again? the patterns are actually rather different from eachother.......and notes used with the piano are as variant as it gets.....i just don't understand what you're talking about?!
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09-12-2004 14:44 |
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Glim
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stupidly read the other comments so now i;'m kinda expecting clownstep...
(that would be a good thing)
good piano, sounds very live and fresh,
hmmm.. i like it
yeah its good
wow thats it??
i was just getting started
well when its done i will be waiting, u hear!! lol
great percussion an i just love rythm so the 3/4 thing works for me.
playin it again and its really is unigue, i would love u to fill it up with some bad company style screams n stabs
my mind is imagining all these things i could add, this is growing on me bruv
not gonna rate it, will when its done
shit!! 3rd time round, really like it man, goin out on a limb kinda like mampi does now an then
much respect!!
Keep at it !!
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09-12-2004 16:56 |
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spudleyq
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thanks man.......this one's my baby.......it's gonna be so evil when i'm done with it......when i first wrote the melody it was sending shivers down my spine!!! can't wait for this one to be finished
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09-12-2004 17:05 |
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Surya
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Very cool melodies, the organ fits great to create a dark atmosphere!
Drums could use a boost, especially the snare.
Are you planning on bringing in a bassline and sub?
Cool concept, but it does seem quite slow indeed.
2/5 for the track
3/5 for the concept 
2/5 for the sound
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