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Registration Date: 23-11-2004
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some new stuff!

feedback would be nice!

http://web3.florenz011.server4you.de/SILT_-_urban.mp3
06-12-2004 14:57
Polar Freq Polar Freq is a male
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sorry for not replying, but i always check the listen part (didn't know peoples post tunes here...)
okay herez some of my feelings 'bout this.
don't like the raves, the eq-ing is kinda.. try raise-ing the raves volume or smthn..
clean up the sound at the buildup like a violin or smthn..
nice metal hats play., im feelin that the most, even though it gets repetitive after a while.
like the yelling and the background ambient nice volume level.
for me it gets alittle bit the same, after a while..
oh heres the change..
i love the soundz, with alot of rev. delay at the end INCORPORATE THEM IN the song more..
whel.. i don't like it much... sorry 1.5/5
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07-12-2004 01:52 Homepage of Polar Freq
Surya Surya is a male
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Tramen is nice, but the ghosts aren't loud enough, it doesn't really rollllllllllllllllll
String stabs are... a bit weird for a DnB track
Reece is cool, but where's the bass?
Drums start getting a bit repetetive.
Disco loop doesn't fit imo. Nice try though, it's quite original.
Track gets a bit repetetive already after 3 minutes. I think what you're missing is some real buildup of tention and release here and there.

Some good ideas, but the execution is lacking in almost all departments, so it needs a lot of work.
1.75/5

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13-12-2004 16:33 Homepage of Surya
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