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homebass 
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Registration Date: 29-04-2004
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a new one...
simple and dirty!!! 
Download
feedback welcome!!!!
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peace out
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05-12-2004 19:02 |
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Cool Steppa
Registration Date: 20-05-2004
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I certainly like the beginning
first melody reminds me of a melody I once used for a task in school, the melody turned out in a different track (no dnb at all), but just today I was thinking of making some dnb of it
but that'll take much time probably, so it won't be happening soon
maybe after the drop I would bring in some melody sooner
gets a bit always the same
after that the tune flows nicely
But what you do is this
same loop (like for example the beat) for 16 bars, and at the end of the 16th you made a change
I would add some (maybe minor) changes in the drum line every 4 bars
cause the melody and the bass are very nice, but the drums sound a bit too much the same throughout the song
and maybe some lfo's (or play some more with the ones on it) to make the main synth (the one of the melody) sound a bit more alive, cause it's a bit too clean imo
But I really like the sound, so keep working on it
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08-12-2004 01:24 |
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DJParash
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Registration Date: 04-12-2004
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The intro is great I don't think that needs any work. I would agree with border that you can change up the drums abit as it does become repetative. Maybe add some stabs in there aswell. otherwise the track has good direction. After the intro it kind a threw me into another direction which was totally un expected and I love that. good work. Just change it up every so often like 8 to 12 bars or so so it isn't so repetative because it started to get boring towards the end. Maybe add some vocals into it to add some flavor to the track. Over all 3/5
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08-12-2004 07:27 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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effective intro, good melodies, creates an eerie feel
love the rave sounds and the way you slowy release the cuttoff
nice gunshot style sample
woul've prefered more of a build up
good bass
well compressed
beatz are too quiet and the amen is a little repetative, maybe play around with the eq of it occasionally imo!!
very competant, alittle slow for that sound imo mate
good stuff nice n twistd
3/5
G
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09-12-2004 18:14 |
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janverstichel
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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good intro nothing wrong with it
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snares need te be louder
beat is repetitive
change it bit
smooth track
DM
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09-12-2004 18:32 |
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homebass
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Registration Date: 29-04-2004
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yo, thanx for your feedback!!!
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peace out
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12-12-2004 20:56 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Nice intro.
Trance pads coming in. A bit unoriginal sound, but the melody works.
Drop: good amens than need work on the sound, good bassline. The amen lacks power and hi-end, so reEQ it and make it a tad louder.
Some wickid variations and twists
Like that.
The sound is very lowfi, but maybe this is the MP3 quality? Makes it hard to judge on the quality of the sound.
Track: 3.5/5
Sound: Dunno, I would have to hear a HQ MP3
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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13-12-2004 13:49 |
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