janverstichel 
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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Please check out my new track '142' and post your comments here!!!
need your comments!
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05-12-2004 15:36 |
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Polar Freq
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Registration Date: 06-11-2004
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hello! how are you!
and now about the review:
downloading still.. and i gots nothing 2 do...wait...94%
here it is..
phone.. hello... makes you wanna answer.. nice breaking sound.. (heard of breaking and entering from prodigy?, im not comapring juz sayin.)
i don't like the clinging sound, its too loud maybe.
nice lines by the way.
interesting vocal part..
the drums are interesting but don't use that all the time.. let the filter go , its time to forget and let go..
hehe 
but iz nice. vocal mix with snare.. nice
string i don't like here at 2:15 but good, its gone now..
you can like make a buildup, for the phone, like answeing it and BOOM it starts to play..
ok, im sleepy now (not becoz of da song, don worry)
peace
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06-12-2004 05:19 |
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Glim
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Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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hello mate!! i like reviewing ur tracks, always something to think about
nice sythns, the phone sample makes for an errie start. i would like to hear more reverb on it though.
cool phasered ghost thingy, what is that by the way??
good beat, nice heavy kick drum
1:28 an the track is still fresh to me
maybe drop that phasered thig round here as its losing its impact
nice bells sound ing things.
i have to say the '1-42' sample sounds a bit cheesy imo
maybe some more variation on the bass work and the change around 3:09 is a bit too loud imo.
aahh the phone sample again, nice...
a bit more reverb and eqing to make the track less digital and more grimey
great effort man
2/5- for general overall sound t aking into consideration my personal prefrences
look forward to hearing more
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06-12-2004 21:08 |
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charleskoncept
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hello? this is the matrix calling! 
nice intro... very chill the bells chimes in the backround are very nice kinda distracting but still good,
trancy drum n bass isnt really my thing but damn this is still good.. 
the drums sound like the could use some more layering maybe, your second break buildup was really nice.. not a big enough drop but good.
the vocal smaple kinda came outta left field IMO it shoulda stayed there. ..
3/5
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07-12-2004 01:34 |
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marine289
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Intro is good, only you could built up a bit more tension, so that the drop falls in better.
Pads could be a little louder, but nice melodies.
Dont really like the drum-samples, try to EQ them a bit better, and may be even complete other samples.
But the beat is good, i just dont like the samples
The vocal is also pretty good, but not the 142 one, you should add some effects to it, it would sound much better i think.
Dont really like the upgoing things starting at 2:00, they dont really fit the track, and some notes dont sound right. It also suddenly stops, and the song continues, but it would be better if you would just hold that a little longer, and give it some more tension, and then drop the beat again.
well its a good song overall, i rate this 3/5
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07-12-2004 13:01 |
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Jeller
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nice song
3.75/5
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08-12-2004 16:34 |
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kareem
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Nice atmospheric intro.
Bootle effect is a nice touch
Don't know what the sound is at the beginning but it definetly has a reverb on it, I think.Anyway I like it.
Bells are nice too and like the song at 2min00 where it like goes in to overdrive.volume levels are set goood.
The Boom ka boom ka is a nice touch.
Like the part on 3min03.
Song has a lot of variation and atmosphere.Very up-tempo.
Nothing bad to say about the song.
Your best work so far.
4/5
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09-12-2004 16:17 |
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Surya
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Intro stings are nice. Nice teasers in there too.
Drums sound a bit lowfi and lack a bit of power. Work on them.
Vocals to the second drop are quite a bit too loud.
Overall nice track, but you forgot the bassline 
Put one in, coz now it sounds a bit too empty.
2.5/5
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13-12-2004 13:35 |
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janverstichel
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thx for all the comments
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