kareem 
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Salvation' and post your comments here!!!
Please give some comments.
If there are things you don't like, tell me.
Hope you like it
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03-12-2004 17:17 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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i lilke the nice fat bass to start with
good harmony startin on 0:35
good 2-step beat, bit loud imo
1:26 and the track is set loose!!
bass needs balancing
good work on the atmospheric sounds
the breakdown with the guitar sound is wicked but the bassline is too loud
some strange melodies that do work
would prefer more grime on the synths
i like it mate but would prefer to hear it in a more solid framework imo!
3/5
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04-12-2004 15:54 |
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muphasta
Master Producer
Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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I agree with ultradark on the sound choice. the beats are ok but fit too tight. the percusions are too loud too. and need to loosen up. use more effec on synths, not meaning delay abd reverb but modulate record in real time move the mouse on the whole plug filters and shit. variate with them during the whole song. but i'm sure you'l get there eventually keep on trying. it doesnt always have to be that tight.
2,5/5
cheers
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05-12-2004 12:23 |
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janverstichel
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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jeah good atmosphere hihats are good and the beat falls in nice
il ike the new sound at 1.02 very mutch but the bongo's that come with it aren't good in my eyes
the guitar melody is good
the overall structure off the songs could be better
the melody's are good
it's youre best song I think
good job karim
3.5/5
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05-12-2004 15:43 |
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Polar Freq
Hounmingootod
Registration Date: 06-11-2004
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don like the bass.
ike the quiet synth at start.
nice. dist..my favorite..lets see how you use it.
buildup... weak..sorry..maybe antoher one?
is it comming..no..
nice bongo, and raindrop thing sound..
again, i like the raindrops.
thats it...
back 2 you
peace
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06-12-2004 05:23 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro synth is nice n warm. Melody isn't very invetive.
Drums: nice puncy. Fill it up with some ghosts though. Snare could use some layering.
The fistorted resonance sounds you play those melodies with are nice.
Bassline kinda... isn't that good. Look for a decent bassline, not this lame synthpatch.
A lot of switching of sounds and melodies. A bit too much imo. Some melodies are out of key too.
1.75/5
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