Polar Freq 
Hounmingootod
Registration Date: 06-11-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Crap' and post your comments here!!!
i know i shouldn't upload so often, i promise this is the last shitty track, been experimenting with smthn. (in a non- experimentative way)
but i will redeem my sins by reviewing millions and millions of peoplez, so don't be mad, ok?
i know the dist bass thingey don't fit, and i know that it sucks, but try to write a bit more, im really interested. thanks
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-Emotions are social illusions.
-What i did not do, i could have not done.
-Art is a kind of public masturbation.
-I am only, my genes tool.
-damjan cd
i have a zen touch and muad'Dib has a girlfriend......everyones happy
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03-12-2004 04:48 |
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muphasta
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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hey bro,
like the rim in the trippy jazzy downtempo first part. drumediting is very good. dont like the strings synth that much. niceweirdnessx in the hats during first break. after the drop drums need more body and warmt. lower the hats also a bit. second break is cool sound nicely done cool!! try focus on a sub bass next . learn a bit of this kind of shit. and use it! could give the beats all the body they need. then ad some other sounds to give the red wire ( the strings) a more back feel then now the upfront. be creative in this use some vox oy you , revesre them true a delay device and thats that, or something like that! but youre getting somewhere 
cheers mate
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muphasta none dnb
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05-12-2004 12:31 |
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Polar Freq
Hounmingootod
Registration Date: 06-11-2004
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thnx, peoplez, but im finished with this kind of dnb, ITS TIME TO BE FREEEEEEE WEEEEEEE
thank you anyway, i thought about your comments...
(really)
peace
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-Emotions are social illusions.
-What i did not do, i could have not done.
-Art is a kind of public masturbation.
-I am only, my genes tool.
-damjan cd
i have a zen touch and muad'Dib has a girlfriend......everyones happy
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07-12-2004 01:45 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro breaks are nice but sound distored. Weird coz the volume isn't too high.
String is distorted too. Is it intentional? Melody is quite nice.
Offbeat hihats... Intentional too, I guess? Doesn't sound very good.
Drop: the bwaaping sound is quite nice acually.
Wops, there we go again: offbeat stuff...
I would say: where's the bass? I guess you forgot that?
I'm still wondering why the sound is so distored.
Well, as you said: not very good, although not everything in there is bad.
1.5/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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