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deciBel 
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Registration Date: 17-05-2004
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I'm working on a new tune at the moment.....I've posted it on
http://www.overplay.co.uk/band.asp?band_id=1000481
its the (D&B) one, just want to get feedback on the kick in, because the intro is a bit dramatic it seems a bit of let down (after listening to it for a week anyway!).
Av a listen ! 
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03-12-2004 00:28 |
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Polar Freq
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maybe you need to lower the volume of the strings.
or raise the drums
nice lines, calm, brings confidence, love the vocal cept' when you raise the pitch (sorry but methinks it ruins a gr8 vocal)
i like the play with the metalic hats, the short ones.
rave a bit booring at a little before middle, but then the gr8 strings come and iz good again.
really good drum play. big up frm me
you need to put more of those strings, maybe fill it more.
i like the slowdown (cept the claps, i hate claps, sorry, its similar to the way i hate audience samples)
raise and uhm... harden the kicks somehow...
good one, bigz you up
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03-12-2004 04:33 |
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Surya
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Very nice concept again.
The Fallen Angels style intro is nice too. Reminds me a lot of "Blue Skies" 
Soundquality leaves a lot to be desired though.
Drop @3.55 lacks impact.
Downtempo breakdown is nice but a bit too long imo. Drop after that could use a bit more impact too imo.
Nice, but still needs work.
2.75/5 for the tune (could raise quite a bit in the final version)
1.5/5 for the sound
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03-12-2004 15:33 |
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deciBel
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yeah, looks like I'm gonna have to re do the main groove, kinda doesnt work well with the rest of the track, and the levels are pretty mashed.
I'll try putting in a few variations of the main strings bit, see how it sounds.
Thanks for the comments!
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03-12-2004 22:32 |
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04-12-2004 00:28 |
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Glim
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great intro
the intro break is good
good vocal placement
like the others i'd prefer to not have any pitch shift
mate the bass you got is propa!!!
good idea oncutting the beat out for a second straight after the drop.
the beat is really infectious man backed up by that pendulum style bassline every now an then
strings remind me of daft punk and they do work well
second breakdown is nice an electronic kinda a john b feel to it
not too keen on the beat at this part sound a bit too much like queen's 'we will rock you'
second drop is heavy like the first
maybe some variation on notes in the bassline at this point??? imo!!
goodstuff , really like the beatz
3/5
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