Surya 
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Yeah, those Dave Akuma breaks rule. Seems they are popular, I hear them in a lot of tracks, mostly unaltered, uncut, just looped.
If you do use them, use them creatively: cut them up and rearange them.
Buildup to the drop is a bit too long. Hoover and bassline are quite good though, but not very original.
Drop: ah, nice tramen sample huh? Like thatone a lot too 
Not a bad track, but very unoriginal. Try adding a more personal touch. This track is more of a compilation of some nice samples than really something you put your heart and soul into. Not bad, but you still have to look for your own style. And now you are probably thinking: "but this is my own style". Probably, yes, but a style is more defined by the details you put into the song (fx, variations, fillups, a certain sound, certain combinations you often make), and you don't have any of that yet in this track.
The soundquality was quite good, but I'm not sure if you paid any attention to it, since the samples you used sound quite good on their own.
I think it would be intresting if you would enter in the next compo we'll be doing here, becouse in those compo's you are limited to certain rules and thus you have to try and fit in there and still be yourself. This way your own style will become more clear and you will learn a lot I think.
2.25/5 for the track
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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