jfry 
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Registration Date: 07-11-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Frost' and post your comments here!!!
Well...been away for a while...damn business trips...anyway..I made this in a couple of hours...i'm experimenting with a few things...trying to take all of your advice...which is great by the way! Basically trying to switch things up and make it more interesting. This still needs work but i have tried to encompass some of the things i've learned from the posts. So here it is..I look forward to your comments.
JFRY
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02-12-2004 02:23 |
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marisol
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this is not drum n bass 
i myself cant stand happy hardcore so dont be pissed about my rating.
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03-12-2004 04:17 |
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Polar Freq
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melikes the start.
maybe at parts to monotonous?
definetly needs some nice smooth lines (or at add some)
i really like the rithm of drums and stuff.. kool
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03-12-2004 04:26 |
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marisol
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well i didnt give much feedback on this track on my first post and im sorry if i was a bit harsh but for a track to even begin to be drum n bass you have to have some breakbeat action with the percusion. simply layin down a 4/4 beat does not cut it. and as far as the bas goes you absolutly must have some sub bass to acompany the rythem. If i played something like this to a drumnbass crowd they would sit down and give me dirty looks 
once agian sorry to be harsh but this is very clearly not drum n bass.
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03-12-2004 12:12 |
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Surya
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Marisol is right. Having a breakbeat layered with a strong 4-4 kick and some breakbeat only parts here and there doesn't make a track DnB.
This doesn't have the feel or the groove of a DnB track. Not the same kind of melodies or basslines or sound or... anything.
Sorry, but I can't see the DnB in thisone either.
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03-12-2004 15:09 |
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jfry
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Thats cool...i can see where your comments are coming from.....i guess it was a little too experimental! Next time its pure drum and bass.
Cheers,
JFRY
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03-12-2004 19:19 |
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muphasta
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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wow yeah.... REAL jungle!!!
I heve a feel if this is properly mixed and mastered, but seems like the jump-up beat isnt tight enough! the tribl asspect is mighty. real lo fi mp3. the beats also control to much of the song. damm man work this out . if not, and if ok with you, i'll try it! even a techno push hehe 
cheers
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05-12-2004 12:37 |
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jfry
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ya man...totally experimental....i had fun with it...but everyone is right...its not really drum and bass or jungle specifically....but it is a combo of a lot of stuff....i you think you want to take a crack at it...go for it...i'd be interested to hear a remix!
cheers mate!
JFRY
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