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Audio Assassin
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Please check out my new track 'Devistation' and post your comments here!!!
Finally after 3 months i get a song out, been awhile and i know this isn't perfect and shit, but i wanna take it one step at a time. to make sure i learn things and learn them well. Not much else to say. Give it a listen, tell honestly what you think......Decent for a year into it and a 15yrs old?
edit by thechronic: this track has been removed, the uploader's info was lost in a database crash
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02-12-2004 02:17 |
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wreakon 
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Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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I like the intro but when the big bass kicks in it sounds really flat and seems to lose qualty some how??
Also i dont really like the contrasting styles of the intro and the main section... maybe just me 
Keep working on it though
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02-12-2004 03:16 |
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jfry
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Registration Date: 07-11-2004
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Hey man ...not bad at all....very Dillinjah, Ray Keith influenced....a couple of my favs. Parts of the track don't go well together tho...also it doesnt sound full enough...some of the samples seem week. Overall I think its a pretty cool track...keep it up.
JFRY
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02-12-2004 05:39 |
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Polar Freq
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Registration Date: 06-11-2004
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the start starts veryy sudden, sim 2 dillinja, yeah and the bass-es are sim 2
but its okay, i would loose or change the ambiental starting sounds,
i reely like the jungle part (is the whole loop a sample or you made it from diff sound instrument samples?)
try makin the bass fit the the drums parts (maybe that would hlp)
nice rave sound though (the sample)
you have smthn going here, i like it.
ill give 3/5 in the like/dislike scale.
cool
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03-12-2004 04:22 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by Audio Assassin
Decent for ... a 15yrs old? |
Well, I've hear much better from guys that age producing 3 months, but I have to admit that guy was extremely talented and had had music courses. His name was JiNMeN.
Intro with the basslines and the simple break is fine.
Drop: very noisy. The tramen is very noisy, dirty and lofi sounding. Try making it clear and punchy instead of just noisy as it is now.
Your basslines are very messy too. I gues there's too much going on and too much reverb.
That's the main comment on your track: try clearing it up a bit. Less noisy, less reverb, less messy, more clear sound.
1.5/5 for the track
1/5 for the sound (sorry)
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03-12-2004 15:14 |
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muphasta
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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ok letts be a bit more diplomatic
I here some things which qua idea much better then some of the artist here, not excluding myself, but you can edit , put sounds in it effects and the shit, now you gotta fucus on ballance, levels, limiting, eq and all that stuff. for example there's too much volume difference between the different beats. a bit too much effect on some atmosphere's. and some basses that just fade in the overal picture. find some stuff on the net on eq, listen and overthink everything that is written here, it doesnt have to be true for all you know where the same as you, there is some truth in most of the things written. keep on practising!!
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05-12-2004 12:45 |
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DJ OMNI
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Registration Date: 06-12-2004
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I liked the intro too... i pretty much say what reckon ways
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06-12-2004 00:37 |
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charleskoncept
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Registration Date: 29-09-2004
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Big up audio assassin mid west says hey!!!
your sounds are killer although what surya says is right and good.. you need to equalize, distorted to HOLY HELL!!!
man you need to get some eq ing lessons or something..
its a good idea and thats what it is now try to refine it.
1/5 <-- sorry
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07-12-2004 01:43 |
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janverstichel
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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i'm also 15 years old and i like youre track but it is to hard and distorded scream is a nice cut
the quality isn't good
how long you've bin producing?
it's not bad but it's too mutch noise for me
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07-12-2004 16:21 |
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pharmacite
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pretty awesome track dude.
i like the big bass and drums. you could maybe compress it a little and bring out all those levels we arent hearing.
i like how it changes from being all scary to be some jumpier style.
good and short. i'm sick of those 8 minute repeatathons.
maaaaaaaaasive
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09-12-2004 17:24 |
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Surora23
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Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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this was an interesting listen...(im currently in school and testing a power point with this song and its anooying the shit out of my classmates lol) ANY way...the levels i think are a little off...also maybe its just cause the drums arent eq'd right, but they sound messy kind of...not really sure, but it doesnt sound right...the bass seems mudded or something...15 pretty decent...ive only been producing drumnbass for about 7 mnths and im 17...dont know if that counts for anything...BUT you got a lot of work...but its all progress...work on the levels and what not, and a bit of structure and youll be on your way...cheers
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10-12-2004 20:12 |
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spudleyq
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haha.......this sounds familiar.......this is almost exactly how my music sounded at 15.......muddled and so full of everything it isn't even funny......five different basses.......four synths.......sixty different drums......hehe.......i'll tell you right now........minimal!!! if you can put a drum track......a bass track......and a synth track in a song all cluttered up with effects and maybe some stabs here and there with some vox......you got it!!! you don't need much......and you definitely need to work on your eqin......and learning how certain sounds fit together......keep it up though........i was fifteen 5 years ago.......and I had already been doing it for four years........and you're farther than i was at that point.....so keep on rockin!!
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10-12-2004 20:21 |
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Audio Assassin
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thats for all the advice guys, idk what was wrong with me, i think i just rushed this one a bit to fast, (alright way to fast). if u listen to my last song epic it was like that at all. it was my fault for tryen to rush shit and not taking time. but thanks again for all the advice guys, i will have to do all of this in the next song, and when i fix this one to redeam myself from such a shitty mess........
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12-12-2004 04:38 |
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