Polar Freq 
Hounmingootod
Registration Date: 06-11-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Fakin' Shit' and post your comments here!!!
something, other than what is known as something by the monkeyman, someday maybe we will all work towards a similar goal in witch have we the same benefits (nothing 2 do wit the song) thnx 4 da reviews, really appreciate them, and you for making them. sick
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-Emotions are social illusions.
-What i did not do, i could have not done.
-Art is a kind of public masturbation.
-I am only, my genes tool.
-damjan cd
i have a zen touch and muad'Dib has a girlfriend......everyones happy
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01-12-2004 02:06 |
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Steppa
Registration Date: 31-01-2004
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ok i'll start from the beginning;
i hear hi-hats, they sound rather hard and clunky, if that's your choice that's okay, but i like them soft and sparkly like fresh lemonade. the pattern of the hi-hats gets a bit annoying also after a while. id stick with a simple 4step or 8step hat.
then a beat kicks in. it's okay but it sounds all fucked with a schizophrenic bd kick.
then the lead kicks in. i get a bit of a tension vibe here, but i could be better. the audience loop is annoying. the schizo beat goes back in. then the odd electric piano synth gets in. it sounds a bit clownish. maybe u meant it like that. it doesnt sound tough tho.
well that's about it. i think you have to get your composition right first. cause it's like a mix of a lot of sounds without a real purpose. there's no build up to a drop at all. try being creative with it and just be clear about when the intro is, when the drop gets there, when the breakdown starts, then you get some clarity in it. im not saying this for all tracks, cause fucking the strcuture can be great times, but before you can say fuck to it, you first have to know how it goes.
so composition skills. get that right.
2/5
don't mean it in a negative way man!
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01-12-2004 18:03 |
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@1$-)
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er.....
say wha???
no offence intended but...what the fuck????
im not really sure what your going for here, being different is a good thing, but dont try and be different just cause you think its cool, or cause you think your rebelling against something, some of the other stuff youve done isnt bad but this is a bit, well....poor. go back to the mental stuff! 2/5
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01-12-2004 18:57 |
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Polar Freq
Hounmingootod
Registration Date: 06-11-2004
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i just tried smthn diff than my old stuff, i really don't care about rebbeling and stuff, i just do stuff that i like, this one is not one of em' by the way.
the structure part, yes, its non exsistant, but that comes wit everyone of the song i make.
did this one in 4 hours, concentrated on some bass rithms, simple yet ... uhm... simple! heeh
no problem man, i would give this song a 1/5 if i am going to. i take no offence from comments and reviews (except if their are in the style of: Fuck you you mottha faka, you suck and you don't have any shoes 
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-Emotions are social illusions.
-What i did not do, i could have not done.
-Art is a kind of public masturbation.
-I am only, my genes tool.
-damjan cd
i have a zen touch and muad'Dib has a girlfriend......everyones happy
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01-12-2004 19:12 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Levels need a lot of work.
Bassline is funny but sounds a bit cheap. And it's too loud.
Quite messy and stuff. A lot of noise. Not that good acually, sorry.
1/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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