janverstichel 
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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Please check out my new track 'energyze' and post your comments here!!!
i think this track is better than the previous one (it sucked)
the effects are not completly finished but post youre comments about the track
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30-11-2004 20:05 |
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Polar Freq
Hounmingootod
Registration Date: 06-11-2004
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i like the minimal style at the start (maybe you should keep it like that more at the start)
build up (bit long) small amount less, or put somethin diff
like the lines in da background alot, and the way it stops with the minimal dist, gr8
nice play wit da drum instruments.
lower the volume maybe of the thing at the start (that sound)
iz good, for me like-ing it ill give 4/5
iz oki
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01-12-2004 02:14 |
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T.O.R.
Cool Tourist
Registration Date: 17-11-2004
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It's not really my style, but its a good song.
3/5
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01-12-2004 11:52 |
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marine289
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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Intro is ok, bass fading in is good.
About the drums: BD doesnt sound nice (in my opinion), but enough variation.
I Really dont like the melody, it just sounds not right. Some notes dont fit eachother, especially the high notes.
Vocal is good, I like it.
I dont know what to say else 
oh, the atmosphere is okay, during the melody, only I think that you should keep the melody major.
The atmosphere during the bass-part is good, only I feel that it could be better when the bassdrum is adjusted. (may be it's just a little too loud)
You need to work on this one,
for now: 2/5
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01-12-2004 17:21 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Melody is a bit weird in the intro, I'm not sure if all notes are right.
Bassline is quite good.
Drums: hmm with this bassline I would go for something more powerfull and furious than a stepbreak. The stepbreak is quite good though.
Body lasts very short to make place for the melodic part again. Make it a bit longer (the part with the bass and stuff)
Melody of the bassline doesn't fit with the one of the melodic part.
2.43: new thing coming in: out of key with the bassline.
Not bad, but too much melodic parts.
2/5
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