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wreakon wreakon is a male
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Please check out my new track '9000Series' and post your comments here!!!


It's the first one I have uploaded and I'm looking forward to some feed back.
I have worked on it for a while and I have no idea if it's any good

I made it totally in FL using Absynth 2 and Dave Akuma Breaks samples from the download section


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30-11-2004 02:32 Homepage of wreakon
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well levels seem to be ok but there isnt really enough sound to keep the tune rollin. the bass is fine but the random style doesnt really get me movin. i like to anticipate basslines. didnt really get my head noddin you know. overall the track seemed very static. as far as using premade loops i tend to be a bit harsh about that so i wont go into it. you might wanna chalk this one up as expirence and move on to a new track. And if you need help building your own breaks i would be glad to offer some help. drums are a large part of dnb so you need to learn how to make rockin breaks from 1 hits or at the very least learn to chop old skool breaks. Bigup
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Thanks for the detailed reply marisol Smile
Im starting to realise why it doesn't sound right&

I tried to make my own beats initially in FL but obviously they sounded crap Now I've just started to slice break samples up. So Ill try and have some more original breaks in my next track.

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30-11-2004 08:57 Homepage of wreakon
Surya Surya is a male
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Nice drums, good groove.
Some hats have too much +15khz

Sub is nice.

Bassline sounds a bit like Aphrodite. Is that what you were after? Not bad.

Drop @ 2.51 is nice.

Nice, but a bit too repetetive.

2.5/5

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03-12-2004 14:47 Homepage of Surya
saphir saphir is a male
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agree on the hat part, maybe they just stand out cuz of the panning. but doens't really bother

i only would add a guiding fast paced riff underneath it all
nothing upfront just something to keep you moving.

maybe some rearangement nothing big, a 'finishing touch" like we say
kinda like the various bass riffs

nice work! me digs

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03-12-2004 17:05 Homepage of saphir
wreakon wreakon is a male
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Thanks for the reviews guys Smile )

No i havent heard any Aphrodite Suryam, recommend any tracks to get?? I was kinda after a pendulum sound.

Ive started working on a new version. Im redoing the intro and adding a lot more atmosphere and generally trying to make it sound more dynamic and interesting.

Hope you guys can check it out when i post it... prob in a week or two.

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05-12-2004 10:13 Homepage of wreakon
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Oh, all Aphrodite's tracks sound the same, so just look some up Smile

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05-12-2004 16:07 Homepage of Surya
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well,
i like the beat and the variation in it
but the songs misses some atmospere
and there isn't mutch variation
but don't get me wrong it's a good track ,mutch better then my first post (maybe even better then my last post Tongue ) and you did some weird stuff with youre bassline but it's cool
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05-12-2004 17:29
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