wreakon 
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Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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A bit long for my liking.. I found myself getting board. I think you could try to squash up the track and try to make it more intense.
Sounds very slick though, nicely produced& bass is solid, sounds full and well balanced. Just not my style I guess
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kuanding
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Registration Date: 31-10-2004
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I like the 2nd part. got bored in the first half too.
good bass and drum sound 
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29-11-2004 23:04 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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interesting intro...there is something rong with that first drumline...dunno why it just doesnt sound right imo...nice little congas in there...gets really boring after those congas...i was waitingf for soemthing to happen...sub could be a little louder...break drops...that synth justisnt doin it for me...try a different sample...after that it just gets boring...nothing really happens with the track...
some ncie percussion in there here and there, but there isnt enough going on...and a lot sounds like its not a part of the breakbeat...might want to work on some of those levels...after that it doesnt do much...nice experimental work, but nothing i would want to hear at a party unless it was a loungy place...good effort htough, but i have to give a 2/5...just wasnt doing it for me...soz...
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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03-12-2004 06:34 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Kick is way to deep and loud, it will interfear with the bassline. It goes down to 40hz, a kick shouldn't have much beneath 80hz. Boost it around 80hz, and it will be nice n punchy.
Snare is quite good but is EQed to sharp around 15khz.
Sub coming in: conflicts with the kick indeed. They are both in the same frequency range.
The guitar samples don't fit imo.
Your melodies and theme's aren't bad but not that intresting, which makes the whole track a bit unintresting.
2/5
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