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kareem kareem is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Superstition' and post your comments here!!!

Weird track. Made on a confusing day.
Changed it so many times I don't know if it's any good.

Like to hear your thoughts.
28-11-2004 18:47 Homepage of kareem
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TRACK IS DEFINETLY MISSING SOMETHIN...1:15 FLUTES COME IN OUT OF TUNE WID THE BASS..PLUS THE WHOLE KARATE FLUTE IS A PLAYED OUT SOUND AS WELL..2:40 THE SONGS COMES AROUND AGAIN BUT STILL NO IMPACT..TRY TAKING THAT BASS, COMPRESS A LIL BIT AND DO A HI PASS LO PASS ON TWO TRACKS TO BRING IT UP A BIT...OVERALL NOT A BAD TUNE WITH A LIL MO WORK...D
28-11-2004 19:10 Homepage of DISKYZE
wreakon wreakon is a male
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^ all caps.. cool

sounds very empty... the break doesnt have enough going on to fill the hi freq on its own and the bass is very weak also. I found using plugins like absynth for bass lines much easier.

The structure of the track seems messy. Some sounds come in out of time... try to be more organised with your sequecing Smile

a good start.. but alot more work needed

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29-11-2004 03:46 Homepage of wreakon
amperror amperror is a male
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hey, the elements (beats, fills, sounds) u use are great...but the composition of dem is really weird...just give another try to rearrange dem with some fx and this could be a very nice tune...still nice work....3/5
29-11-2004 19:34 Homepage of amperror
kuanding kuanding is a male
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first thing I noticed is the reverb applied in this song.
every element is flying around, hard to focus on anything.
I'd suggest spend some time on the build-up. Big Grin

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29-11-2004 23:08
janverstichel janverstichel is a male
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yooo
good track kareem nice melody
but the structure isn't as good as the melody
it isn't boring because of all the different samples
youre beat could use more swing(not that my beats are that good) but i'm only giving my opingnion
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who made that logo?
jelle? Pleased

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30-11-2004 20:06
T.O.R. T.O.R. is a male
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Not bad, but you can do much better.

2,5/5
01-12-2004 11:50
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Wobble bassline is quite decent, but melody will get boring fast I think.

Drums sounds a bit empty and lack energy.

Some melodies sound a bit out of key and sounds aren't that impressive.

Awtch, that flutesound doesn't fit at all.

Bassline after that sounds out of key.

Some good sounds and idears, but overall execution isn't good. A lot of combinations you make don't work.

You do have a lot of variations, and that's good Smile

1.5/5

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03-12-2004 14:28 Homepage of Surya
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