 janverstichel - higher thoughts |
janverstichel 
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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Please check out my new track 'higher thoughts' and post your comments here!!!
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28-11-2004 17:31 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Melody in the intro is weird.
Drums: kick is quite loud and sounds too digital. Overall the drums sound too empty. When the hats come it, it's better.
Bassline lacks bass.
I'm not too fond of your style of sounds and melodies you chose. Dunno, doesn't sound right to me. Not like DnB anyway. Sorry
1.5/5
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28-11-2004 18:26 |
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wreakon
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Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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Basicaly i agree with Surya...
The break sounds too electro for a dnb track...
I dont think there is a bass line at all??
I think it would be eaier to turn it into a good trance track than a good dnb one... hehe soz
but an uplifting track overall, and not painfull to listen to
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29-11-2004 04:28 |
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janverstichel
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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yeah i don't know what came up to me
when i lissen again i hate the track too
but it's too late now
it sucks
dm
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29-11-2004 19:20 |
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Jeller
Producer
Registration Date: 11-11-2004
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u can do waay better it's nto real bad, but it's not attractive
2/5
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29-11-2004 22:31 |
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kuanding
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Registration Date: 31-10-2004
Posts: 4
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it sounds 70's 
kinda like video game theme and I see come caracter jumping around.
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29-11-2004 23:11 |
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Polar Freq
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Registration Date: 06-11-2004
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use different sample man, drop those midi samples, (cept you wanted it 2 sound like that)
i like the string, only it gets booring after a while (consider changing smthn)
+yeah this part was a bit the same before 1:25
and after 15 sec
fix the vocal, try changing smthn wit it, play witht the vocal more.
okay
this on i like this: 2.5/5 much
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