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amperror 
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Registration Date: 13-10-2004
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never heard your previous work, but this sounds great (title also)
nice atmo intro, beat can use a boost, don't like the arpeggio melody, good bass sound, good structure...
nice track, but could use xtra sound and beat perfection..
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27-11-2004 13:28 |
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saphir
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Registration Date: 15-11-2002
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sound is dope
though your melodie sounds really loud compared to the rest
the intro is very nice, with the fx'ed hi hats & cymbals.
maybe the basslike sweep pad has too much body for an intro. duno
snare could use a little extra snappy touch once it drops
maybe the sub is too upfront too.
nevertheless, nice attempt but to be honest not really my thing. the melody round 2.05 doens't really fit. i think it's better without it.
work on it
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27-11-2004 16:42 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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trippy intro
nice melodies
hmm..
like the beat
acid thingy is good too
losts of bass on this one
track need some more effects and the snare should be higher in my opinion, generally your synths are a bit too loud
its just after the second drop now an this track is growing on me
Keep at it
got any other material??
G
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28-11-2004 16:09 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro is good
Drums coming in: nice sound, but the snare sounds very compressed. Hats and rides are too loud though.
Bassline is good.
Your track has a huge gap in the frequency spectrum though: there's no mid. Fix that.
Melody that comes in @ 2.00 is out of key. When you play it together with the other patch... awtch.
2/5 for the track
1.5/5 for the levels
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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28-11-2004 17:49 |
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muphasta
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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30-11-2004 11:41 |
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Jeller
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Registration Date: 11-11-2004
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haha very nice title 
good song too, i like the beat and the tunes
3.5/5
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Jeller
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30-11-2004 13:03 |
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Airfull
Sexy Lady
Registration Date: 09-11-2002
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I like ur intro
ur drums are a bit wussy in the beginning, but after u'r 'lil drop it's better!
at the and of a drum, I'ld make this tududududu effect louder/harder...
lol, fuck, how do i have to call that!
you don't have to hear it very well, but it would be better in the ears...
not bad but can better!!
2.5/5 - 3/5
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30-11-2004 17:45 |
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Polar Freq
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Registration Date: 06-11-2004
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yep, i concur for the intro part, i like the strings (smtimes to loud)
when the phaser goes, put a compressor so it won't get that loud (or tweak it smhow)
i don't like that wasp, its kinda midi style, but when the bass kicks in it kinda covers it, so its oki.
snare could be less cloudy??
ghost snare is oki (timing thing)
raves to loud.
don't like it 2 much, sorry, like 1.5/5 in the like scale of mine
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03-12-2004 04:43 |
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miki
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Registration Date: 10-06-2004
Posts: 63
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thnx guys and girl for the comments. I have much to learn, I think.
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MiKi
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03-12-2004 18:24 |
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The drums are awesome, the melody itself is great. Around 3:38 sounds awesome... before that the sound needs a change... not in melody just the actual sound.
Overall very good!
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03-12-2004 23:59 |
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. sub s too loud too!!