Glim 
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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Please check out my new track 'mmmm.....' and post your comments here!!!
u ever find urself makin a tune and the rythms u get into keep delaying u an start makin u complacent?? i do when i play mi guitar i never get as good recoreding as when i'm jammin an improvising, i'll shut up now an await punishment!!
okay, let me know what u think
G
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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26-11-2004 23:58 |
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miki
Producer
Registration Date: 10-06-2004
Posts: 63
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those hihats are quite quiet ... and I think hole track is quiet, but it doesn't matter. drums are nice, i like them. bass is nice too. it's chilling track. hmmmm ... it ended in its best ...
what can I say more about it, i'm not expert about it, but i'd give it 2.5/5
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27-11-2004 01:22 |
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saphir
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 15-11-2002
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hey i like this!!!!
hi hats might sound a tad to quite yes, but once the drums fill in guided by the bass it's all good.
wicked vibes yet served chilled.
i like the subtile rolls once a while,
gooooood!!!!!
only the bass words melody(at the end of the first part) sound a bit "hmmmm" 
extra melody in the breakdown is sweet!
now focus on your loudness!
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27-11-2004 16:51 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro: hats have some mid to them that you should filter out.
Nice buildup
Ah, downtempo beats. They sound quite lowfi, but not bad.
Ah, now you go uptempo
Nice work on the ghosts
Wow, heavy sub. It's too loud in comparison to the rest though.
Overall volume is very low, try boosting the volume a bit next time! In fact, you should try to get your track as loud as possible, without compromising the soundquality of fucking up the dynamics.
Very dark track, that is a bit too empty for my taste.
Strings to the end are very nice, but I'm not sure they fit with the first part of the track.
2/5
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- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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28-11-2004 17:43 |
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muphasta
Master Producer
Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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wow very quiet recording.
hats loop is nice. melody ok too but dont like the sound that much. u should begin less complicated with the downtempo. and less fast to the uptempo. construct it more. the voice is very nice.sub bsound is nice. the loudness doesnt bother me that much. it does need some more other sounds high contrasts. the editing of the drums is quite good but the choice of basskick is too flat imo. dont realy like string quartet unless they sound real. like the little core-tranz intermezzo. man this isnt finished. empty feel still ad warmth and fulness.
2,5/5
cheers
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30-11-2004 11:33 |
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Airfull
Sexy Lady
Registration Date: 09-11-2002
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it's cool
when i listen to it, I sea a boat(submarine)
crashing against something, the water coming in...all the 'heisa' everybody is working and running to close the holes...the captain sending sos codes to all the other boats...
and then the slower part, everybody giving up, know that they will die...
and then the fear of drowning.....
allright, i like it!!!
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30-11-2004 12:29 |
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Polar Freq
Hounmingootod
Registration Date: 06-11-2004
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confirm, da ghosts r nice
nice lines
bass louder (and more different, somekind of rithm could be nice)yeah the end is cool to, nice
reel like that part. until it has that small buildup again and then its back to normal (cept da bass)
my taste gives this a 2/5
(sorry i don't judge on production and stuff, i think somehow in a strange way, judging production is pointless, 4 me atleast) peace
and bye
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