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rabbeat 
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Registration Date: 19-02-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Incident' and post your comments here!!!
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26-11-2004 13:25 |
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Soi
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Registration Date: 29-01-2003
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Your sound would easily fit in with the German/Berlin Kompakt/Tresor kinda labels, pitty they're not into dnb.
The gliding bass thingie is intruiging and nice, maybe give it some more volume?
Melancholic melodies are quite upfront in the mix.
Amen-variation drops: at the right time
Back to normal beat with the synthesised sax/trumpet: hmmm, not too fond of it (but i never like synthetised 'real' instruments').
All your melodies sort of musically relate well to eachother.
Second amen-variation drop: nice work on the drumedits, but maybe you could put it more upfront and with totally different eq-settings? I guess you used these eq-settings on purpose.
I like the drums and the melodies the most. Nice work.
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26-11-2004 19:36 |
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marine289
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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Great song, really enjoyed it (like all your songs).
Good beat, nice amen once in a while, drums are tight.
Some melodies could be played a little less 'vague' (as in: too much echo/delay, too soft). you could play them a bit more in the foreground.
But on the other hand, it has something, it gives the track some atmosphere (which is pretty good in this track).
The bass is actually pretty original. I like the fact that it's gliding, it has enough variation (in the amen-section) but like Soi said, it could use more volume.
Good track, although I think this is not your best one.
3.5/5
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26-11-2004 20:27 |
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marisol
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Registration Date: 23-09-2004
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good tune with nice atmosphere but some things threw it oof for like the synthetic sounds. just made it kinda cheesy otherwise this track sounded nice.
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26-11-2004 20:59 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Instro: nice melodies and sounds!
Snare has a lot snap, but I could prefer a bit more punch.
Bassline melody is really nice. Just a slight touch of distortion to it would be nice.
Amen drops: nicely done! Bassline needs more power here though.
Very nice sounds and melodies. Very dreamy.
Overall the sound lacks a bit in the low-mid and bass departments, so you'll have to work on your levels.
Also, the track is overcompressed me thinks.
3.25/5 for the track
2/5 for the levels
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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28-11-2004 17:35 |
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