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spudleyq 
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Registration Date: 23-09-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Dark Inside Me (Rough Fractical Mix)' and post your comments here!!!
reworked it....let's hope this is better.
*note: monitored on shitty ass Cyber Acoustics headphones...so some advice and help with the levels and the freqs would be greatly appreciated
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24-11-2004 20:35 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro is quite good.
Drums are nice, switching is well done too.
The part before the breakdown is too long though, it doesn't have enough elements to stay intresting for 2.30
Good bassline.
Wow, quick drop. Maybe play a bit more with that bassline before dropping?
Ah, yeah, now I remember this track. Good hoovers, too bad the bassline is lowpassed there.
Ooops, sub starts overpowering everything, that's what happens when you master on headphones 
The second tramen is still too loud.
Quite nice, but mastering needs a lot of work.
3/5 for the track
1.75/5 for the mastering
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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25-11-2004 17:25 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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u've got a very effective but slightly long intro, imo!!
nice...
unsettling vocal works well
good synth work, dig the melodies
OOOOWWWW!!
WICKED BASS 
drop is more sooner than i woul'dve liked
nice mid range gritty thing
i would like to hear a couple of pendulum style lead runnin over this point, but that jus me
3:05 the track is really rollin, nice switchin (if thats what u call it), taking place
4:05 the sub bass is great, a real turing point of the track, the very first amen break u bring in could be louder imo.
this will get another play, 4 sure
Good track
keep at it
3.5/5
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25-11-2004 18:59 |
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spudleyq
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Registration Date: 23-09-2004
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yeah......i really need to get some shit together.......i use old ass software with barely enough abilities to make a track even this bad........some shitty ass headphones and a shitty ass computer.......this computer isn't even mine.....it's my dad's........this one is alright........but the one I use for my productions is just pathetic....really pathetic....233 MHz....64 Mb RAM.....it's just awful....it's a shame all this talent is wasted.......i have a computer in mind.....I just need the money to get it......I have all the killer software in the world......I just need my own computer to put it on (my dad has windows 2000 on this computer and he takes away most of the user priviledges) I know how to get administrative access of course.......just not without changing his password and him knowing it
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26-11-2004 14:39 |
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“For the moment anyway, political philosophy is dead”
— Peter Laslett, Philosophy, Politics and Society (1950) 
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