deciBel 
Producer
Registration Date: 17-05-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Dont Let Go' and post your comments here!!!
Havnt made a track in while......wanted to make a smasher. All feedback welcome
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24-11-2004 18:46 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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nice abstract - jazzy style intro
piano is distorted sounds like a file error?? i dunno
nice vocals could do
with more delay on inrto vocals
nice build-uo
aaah cowbell mayhem!!! lol
3:01 nice atmospherics
okay the snare needs work and the cowbell wot ever thingy migigy could do with variation or effects
2/5
not bad, will give it another play
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24-11-2004 18:55 |
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deciBel
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Registration Date: 17-05-2004
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yeah G, theres a bit of distortion on one of the piano chords, need to sort that.
only spent a couple of hours on this one, could do with a bit of tidying up.
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24-11-2004 19:10 |
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muphasta
Master Producer
Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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very smooth jazzy chords. pitty the quick chord change is too mechanical. use some more chords. make it real jazzy not mech. jazzy.
and sorry but my personal taste with the female voice like this is the same as in Milk inc, dj Tïesto and all sorts off this crap.IMO!!!! beats are very cool. nice downpitching drop. very annoying sound = very cool. sub should be more present i think. you need some more terrors. bass at 3.50 is incredible!!!! need more screeming basses. like you said work on it some more hours.
its very dark and heavy yet trancy jazzy, but it needs some warmth now. do some high background noises or something.
still nice one for a couple of hours!!!!
3,5/5
cheers
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muphasta none dnb
www.myspace.com/muphsugar
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Roots-reggea-project: muphsteppa
muphsteppa@reggeadubwise
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25-11-2004 13:06 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Don't really like the piano intro. And it clips a bit.
Vocals sound like Dillinja vocals (no offence, they sound quite good).
Intro is a bit too long imo. Sounds a lot like Dillinja structurewise too 
Beats in the intro sound overcompressed. Together with the bassline they even sound a bit thin.
Drop: Heavy bassline, which is nice. Maybe give it a bit more mid.
The clavz are very irritating though.
Body is very short in comparison to the intro and breakdown, which shouldn't be the case imo.
The vocal is overused after the second drop.
Good idear for a dancefloor smasher, but it lacks in some departments.
2.5/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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25-11-2004 17:15 |
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