Polar Freq 
Hounmingootod
Registration Date: 06-11-2004
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me likes the lines strings and the little whistling sound.
but i don't like that whistling trancy sound (i don't think it fits)
nice bass.
nice after buildup thing but try mixing with the drum seq. more.
yeah love the dist. wasp (could go a notch lower)
nad you could go with the low bass up a notch
sorry, don't like the drum samples (as a sound)
but like how they are combined.
nice
the end could be less sudden.
good
4/5
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24-11-2004 19:12 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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yeah cheers mate,
my setup latly has all been about having bad samples or making the wrong choice when writing a track.
totally right on the pitch of the bass and i too was unsure of the trancy ts404 running over the beat.
again put together
i gotta lot to learn
i'm ready...
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24-11-2004 19:17 |
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muphasta
Master Producer
Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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a good mix down is always hard. its quite ok imo. nice spacy atmo. pitty after the drop you have a wicked bass sound but beats should be more complex from this point. maybe let the 16 shaker begin with the drop after the break. ad some more higher atmosphere's too. the hgih sound u use at 3.20 a bit louder.
quit nice song. but i have a fel that the last synth change should move over smoothly to the ending and not drasticly like you did. Hey IMO!!!!!!!!!!
3,5/5
cheers
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25-11-2004 12:51 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Nice pads in the intro.
Of of your hats is too agressive in the hi-end, it really hurts my ears.
Bell like sounds are sweet. Fits well with that bandpassed bassline.
Drop: nice going mate, fonky groove in the bassline. The hats overpower the snare though.
As you can see here your hats are very loud around 17khz, that's why it hurts so much.
3/5 for the track
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