stickbubbly
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Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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the drums sound nice in the intro. I didnt like the first drop. A bit too stange. After the second drop the song improves. ya, the rest of the song is sweet. A bit repetative, but who cares!
Nice one!
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22-11-2004 23:27 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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lets skip right too the beat
i like the fill in with the kick drum its one of my favourites.
oooww, gritty high end synth
ok the the tune is bangin and i'm totally feelin it especially the bits where u drop the beat in have a sound or vocal.
i gotta say the bass needs more effects to stray away from the repetitve sound the frequencies generate when heard succesivly
good choice on changin the vibe makes the second drop more darker and anticipated
this is a really good track, i would happily rinse it at a rave.
peace
Glimmer
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23-11-2004 17:41 |
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janverstichel
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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nice intro,good effects
the melody I when the beat falls in (the strings) i liked less
bass at 1.48 is cool
good track 3.5/5
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23-11-2004 20:35 |
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muphasta
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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waw sounds cool the intro. heavy treathning afterwords. nice beats. the light main sound , i dont like. the wisteling tone in the background is cool. creamy basses are cool too. maybe let the high wisteling tone in it. sub sound is good but i think it would sound better if putted under the basskick eachtime, meaning more notes. (could be worse too, got to hear it). snare culd be a bit heavier. nice change in atmo chordies. mmm nice relaxing. then ex^plode? nice drop sudden! but i heavied up (imo). screaming long pitching basslines. after the droop more variation is needed. it takes a bit too long to get to the variation. but its good. outro s forseen on beatmixing, hehe.
nice render.
3,5/5
cheers
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24-11-2004 11:12 |
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marine289
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Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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Nice intro, good beats, although the snare could be a little snare-sound like, I dont know how to explain
Nice effects, overall. (especially like the bells)
Break at 1:50 is good, you bring in the bass quite nice, although it would be better if there is just a short silence (or delays rolling out) before you start the bass. (well that's what I think).
The part before the vocals at 2:15. The beat stops too sudden. Nice vocals though, nice echo.
Really like the pad coming in at 3:45, I think that the track gets better there.
Outro could be a little longer, shorten a bit on the rest of the track.
Good track
3.5/5
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24-11-2004 16:06 |
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peet
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Registration Date: 31-01-2004
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thank you everyone.
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24-11-2004 22:29 |
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Surya
The Robot

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Intro is quite nice.
Bandpassed bassline is nice.
Drop: Works. Bass could use a boost though.
Quite nice stereo image.
Beats could use a boost overall.
Second drop works too
It's just a tiny bit too much of the same. Try shortening the track a bit (a minute or so) to keep it nice n tight.
Quite nice
3/5
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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25-11-2004 15:15 |
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intro is a bit to old skool, sounds like R - TYPE, dont really like the intro but the drop is good, change the pad sounds to something more modern, and add some variation on the b line, the 'bodyrock' style beat which comes in later is nicely done. 3/5
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29-11-2004 21:35 |
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marisol
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Registration Date: 23-09-2004
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the b line sounds like it was swiped from caliber "drop it down" just with distortion. dunno if you got your inspiration from that track but the b line is identical in the melody. all that aside this track sounds nice but i think the vocals dont fit it to well. mix down seems nice and clean and i liked the pendulum beats you threw in. but agian the b line isnt very original. get those glitches fixed too they threw me off.
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29-11-2004 22:58 |
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Airfull

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Registration Date: 09-11-2002
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hey hey
the pwooww-wwowww effect is back!!!
thehe, in this track you should make them harder, alle not to hard neither, maybe put some more effect on it!!
(don't ask me how
, I just tell u what I feel)
it's cool, nice variations in it!
it's not getting boring, that's what we need!
bigup!!!
I like ur melody to!!
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ONE BULLET? TWO BULLETS? THE THIRT ONE IS THROUGH MY HEAD!
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30-11-2004 12:36 |
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Jeller
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I like the tunes and beats, it's a bit montone so i think it's too long, but still good job
keep up the good work bro
4/5
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30-11-2004 12:54 |
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peet
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thanks everyone again.
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the b line sounds like it was swiped from caliber "drop it down" just with distortion. |
hehe, well. to be honest with you, i was listening drop it down a lot at the time of doing this track, the bassline was roughly inspired by it. they're still two different sounds tho. and if you think in terms of melody they are even more far from eachother. still cool that u say it cause you're right about it for a bit!
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30-11-2004 18:44 |
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marisol
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yeah i like this track better than drop it down to be honest. i just kept hearing the drop it down vocals in my head. hehe good work
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30-11-2004 21:32 |
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peet
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16-12-2004 15:28 |
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