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muphasta 
Master Producer
Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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Please check out my new track 'The Egg' and post your comments here!!!
well this ones made in a quick flow of insanity. moments of foam on the mouth you know the drill..... not very content about it but its crazy enough. know there are a few mistakes too but anyway .... its not like the lately tendens of live instruments this is all Digital!!!!
hehe
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muphasta none dnb
www.myspace.com/muphsugar
reggeadubwise.com
Roots-reggea-project: muphsteppa
muphsteppa@reggeadubwise
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22-11-2004 19:07 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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really like the 4-beat intro, and the hardcore synth running over and b4 the drop
great drumwork - really crisp sound followed by a nice distorted set of breaks
some serious variety goin on
1:36 things startin to get hectic n dark
great atmosphere created on the second drop
i have to ask were you high on acid when you made this track!!!??
good stuff all round
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23-11-2004 00:04 |
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amperror
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damn weird stuff...
...great work (^_^)
try some more compression/saturation ....4/5
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23-11-2004 01:01 |
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Bidness
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Registration Date: 23-11-2004
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Not bad.
Kinda sounds amaturish, tho.
Sounds like an attempt at a Venitian Snares track, but with way to little distortion.
Creative drums but slap on more distortion, IMO.
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23-11-2004 05:50 |
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Polar Freq
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Registration Date: 06-11-2004
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the kick is kinda gabba (me no like sorry) thaz 4 da starting kick.
but the raves are nice.
after 50, thaz nice (the drum section)
have the raves dominate throughout the whole song more.
ohyeah now iz good and now is 1:33, like it much
yeah it iz xperimental, but try gettin crazy on the instruments themselves alittle bit (methinks)
don't like the bass at 2:38 but the scream (higher freq.) iz good.
cool chill at 3:30, you could hold that more..
fuck the snares up alittle.
personally this song is kinda... you know I LIKE IT!!
'cept the drums samples
all other iz 5/5 from me
really enjoyed it
i gona play it again
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-Emotions are social illusions.
-What i did not do, i could have not done.
-Art is a kind of public masturbation.
-I am only, my genes tool.
-damjan cd
i have a zen touch and muad'Dib has a girlfriend......everyones happy
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24-11-2004 06:07 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Not too fond of the gabber intro.
Drop: erm, kinda a totally different track, no? Try making the transition less forced.
Drums don't have any power. Make them louder and punchyer. They sound very thin now.
Your sounds and melodies are a bit messy too.
The scary pad around 2.10 is nice.
The bassline is alost unnoticable. Give it a boost and a sub.
Theme switching is done very rough
Needs a lot of work on structure and sound
1.75/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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25-11-2004 15:08 |
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muphasta
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Originally posted by Surya
Not too fond of the gabber intro.
Drop: erm, kinda a totally different track, no? Try making the transition less forced.
Drums don't have any power. Make them louder and punchyer. They sound very thin now.
Your sounds and melodies are a bit messy too.
The scary pad around 2.10 is nice.
The bassline is alost unnoticable. Give it a boost and a sub.
Theme switching is done very rough
Needs a lot of work on structure and sound
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this is actually the truth, the way i feel about it myself. i dont tink its well produced but its crazy enough. its this kind of review mixed with above kinds that really helps. didnt expect to get any 4's let go of the 5's. but it is made in half a day not meaning to expand this song to releasable levels. just wanted it to chear you up with some crazyness!! 
(in some kind of way).
promise my next one will be .....
cheers and tnx
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muphasta none dnb
www.myspace.com/muphsugar
reggeadubwise.com
Roots-reggea-project: muphsteppa
muphsteppa@reggeadubwise
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25-11-2004 18:56 |
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saphir
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 15-11-2002
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i hear a killer tune from 2.19 :|
work that shit awt! i like that part to the bone.
nice bassline but the sub must stand out, i miss it.
the octaved extra reecelines are sick, but can use more power
maybe it's experimental but to me from 2.19 till somewhere
2.50 that part could be a very sick tune me thinks...
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www.nitras.be
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