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janverstichel 
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Please check out my new track 'paradise elite remix' and post your comments here!!!
i remixed kareem's tune paradise elite because i liked the birds
it's a totally diferent song
made in fruityloops
I realy like it
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22-11-2004 19:04 |
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kareem
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A very worthy remix 
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Very cool and dramatic intro.
Beats are crazy.
Like the little effects, they make the song complete and interesting.
Build-up at 3min40 is very atmospheric, but there's a strange little disturbing noise that follows.
Like the song very much.
I give it a definite 4/5
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22-11-2004 19:20 |
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janverstichel
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thx kareem i'm glad you liked it
but it's youre birds melody so don't light me up too mutch
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22-11-2004 19:32 |
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marine289
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Allright, as promised, here's your review. 
Let's start with the intro: really cool, only the atmosoheric sound could use some more delay. It is just gone instantly, it should disappear slowly, that's much cooler. I like the part right before the beat.
Beat is pretty good too, only BD could be a little better.
Well, I heard the original before this one already a few times, and Im sorry to say this, but im really getting sick of the bassline and also the birds.
You should have paid more attention in class when his track was reviewed 
The break at around 3:07 is quite okay, the dark atmoshphere is coming back a bit, and at the outro too.
Variation of the beat is getting better, so that's good. Im not perfectly sure about that though, I dont know what it is, but... well... I cant explain it... sorry.
Well, overall, an average to okay track, beats are okay. As I said before, I didnt really like the bass (could use more variation + a filter would make it better), and the birds (just not my style).
So, im gonna have to give you a 2/5
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22-11-2004 20:10 |
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stickbubbly
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drums are nice and hard. cool melody. snare is a little quiet. samples cool. I feel like the song is its missing something. maybe some dreemy pads or something.
Nice one
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22-11-2004 23:42 |
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Glim
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good industrial intro
not dnb then? or is it cos its a remix??
bassline is a little repetitive but the beat keeps things fresh
nice fat acidy stabs
i'm a fan of odd industrial effects
cant help thinkin that the beat would work so well at 178bpm
not bad effort, would like to hear the original to get a different perspective
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23-11-2004 16:52 |
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janverstichel
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jeah i know but i had a problem
the melody's were made on 140bpm so i couldn't
make the beat on a drum'n bass tempo
could somebody telle how i can turn the beat faster en the melody slower in the same song (in fruityloops)
thx
dm
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23-11-2004 21:40 |
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T.O.R.
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23-11-2004 21:48 |
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marine289
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Wow, you are getting good reviews on this one 
You can't turn the beat faster and the other parts slower in one song. What you can do, is that you seperate the beat and the rest of the song.
You cut the beat to a new .flp and then you can adjust the tempo.
When you have done that, export the beat as a .wav and load it into the rest of the song (the whole song, but without the beat). Then you open a new audio clip, and load the beat in it.
That's the only way that I can think of, to do that.
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24-11-2004 15:56 |
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thechronic
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This track has something which makes it really good.
I can't really describe it, but I have been playing a playlist of the top 30 tracks of this month all day and every time this track plays it really gets my attention and I'm feeling better instantly. Makes me unconsciously start tapping my feet and nodding my head, and that only happens with few songs on this site. It just has this undescribable but wonderfully uplifting feel! 
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24-11-2004 22:13 |
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Surya
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Don't really like the melodies in the intro. The vocal is really cool though.
Hmmm. Not too fond of the whistle melody. It's a bit dull imo.
The breakbeats are really nice, but it clips 
More of nu skool breaks than real DnB, no?
Some nice effects n stuff.
The melodie around 2.05 seems out of key, lucky it's not too much up front.
Aargh, those birds again...
3.32: that out of key melody again.
Buildup to the second drop takes a bit too long imo.
Very nice breakbeats, some nice effects, but your sounds and melodies don't do it for me, sorry.
2.5/5
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25-11-2004 15:24 |
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