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djhixxx
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Please check out my new track 'Not the Solution (lower quality) 112kbps' and post your comments here!!!
this is my best track to date i think, but is still not finished entirely, this is only 112kbps but that doesn't make a difference cos i checked it, it sounds fine, still unmastered but i want feed back on the tune as it stands, i like it as it is, and i know what i have to do to it, i just wanna know if you guys like it and would put it in your set and stuff like that, big love!!! enjoy!!
This track has been deleted. Reason: cleaning up old tracks
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22-11-2004 18:26 |
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djhixxx
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come on guys dont hold out on me, i think you'll like this one
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22-11-2004 20:19 |
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Surya
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Lol. There's a thing called patience you know
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22-11-2004 20:22 |
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peet
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i can totally see where you were meant to go with this. bit of a pendulum+bassline smith+calibre mixed into some crazy jump up stuff. the composition is allright but the sounds dude! the sounds need work in ruffing up. it just takes time practicing but if you get the sound right you're not even that far away from a rockin jump up track.
2/5
why only 2 stars? cause it needs more work man. i'll give you a full 5/5 if it's rockin.
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22-11-2004 20:29 |
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djhixxx
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think you need new ears mate, sorry
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22-11-2004 20:45 |
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DJDREAMER
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My kind of DnB, but like other peeps have said, needs ruffing up.
Clever track, very synthy, good use of melodie, maybe an alternative in the bassline.
Maybe add some ruff ups sounds, maybe rumbles or gunshots (jus an example)
Repect!
4/5
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22-11-2004 20:48 |
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stickbubbly
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I can feel the pendulum influence in this one. Its a good melodie. I think it needs more atmospher. Some more effects and samples to fill it up. The sub is good but it could be tighter. dont like the melodie after the second drop. drums are nice.
nice track!
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23-11-2004 00:05 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by djhixxx
think you need new ears mate, sorry |
No he doesn't. It's not like he has to like your tune or sounds or anything...
My review will follow soon.
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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23-11-2004 00:06 |
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Surya
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Intro is nice.
Drop: works. Basslines are quite nice and switching is quite good too. The others are right about the Pendulum influences: you can clearly hear them, but this is not at dence as their tracks.
Drums: not too fond of the snare. A bit static too. And boost your kick a bit to make it kick a bit more. (+- 80hz)
Breakdown is a bit too long.
Second drop is a bit empty. I guess you're missing a sub there.
The track is too long though. This should be like 5 to 6.5 minutes, not 8. Tighten it up a bit.
Recording clips a bit
Not bad, but needs filling up and more variation to the drums.
3/5
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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23-11-2004 14:18 |
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mnemonix
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Good track! But a bit too quiet!!!
Quality bad is a pity! And that would throw off it to itself, in the collection tracks!
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23-11-2004 15:26 |
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marisol
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good bassline but your snare needs some of the release cut out of it maybe make the first of the 2 a little short to give it some syncopation. you got some digital clipping goin on so i can see how the low quality mp3 wouldnt sound different. good track but it needs some more tuning and dont be afraid to throw some fiter modulation over the bline it would help it carry along.
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23-11-2004 16:44 |
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djhixxx
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new version of the track coming up soon sorry for snappin earlier in the thread i was having a real bad day
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24-11-2004 14:18 |
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Glim
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i cant say much apart from this track is very good
the 4-note b-line could get a tiny repetitive in my books but the production on it compared to my setup speakes volumes
good shit, keep rinsin
Laterz
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24-11-2004 18:41 |
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djhixxx
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thanks guys, got the dark remix coming your way very soon, and finished version of black christmas although a bit late, lol.
__ I THINK YOU UNDERESTIMATE ME JEEVES, FETCH MY COAT AND GRAPPLE HOOK!!!!
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