Jeller 
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Registration Date: 11-11-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Mescaline' and post your comments here!!!
Made with fruity loops, my second d&b song, feel free to post ur comments
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22-11-2004 18:16 |
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janverstichel
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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beat is nice but put more power in it
youre melody's are childish but there are not bad
you used very weird samples
overall quality of the song isn't bad but i don't like the song that much
on 3.22 the song gets a bit hectic but that part I like the most of the song
but for youre first post it's not bad
2/5
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22-11-2004 19:01 |
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kareem
Cool Producer
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Tunes are kept simple and need effects.
Beats are good but need variation and they need to be louder.
Needs bass,and the tunes don't really mix well.
you need some build-ups to put more action in the song.
Some tunes are good but need to be worked out.
2.5/5
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22-11-2004 22:48 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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firstly the intro could be longer
and some more effects on the synths
i assume at 1:06 is the drop?
maybe lose the laser type sound running over the track or turn it down a bit
2:01 track dips in life but soon lifts
overall you keep the track busy, lots goin on
good effort mate
keep at it
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22-11-2004 23:57 |
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Jeller
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thx for the comment, it's true that i need a bass ans some more variation on beat
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23-11-2004 10:48 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Hmmm, sounds are a bit dull, and so are your melodies. The melodies are out of key too (most of them). Fix that.
Try using more natural sounds, not digital and clean. DnB is dirty 
Drums are quite OK, but your kick sounds too digital too and is too deep. A kick shouldn't have too much beneath 80hz. It interfears with the bassline then. The snares need a boost in the overall mix.
Overall you're missing bass too.
The track is recorded too loud, the sound clips. Whach that meter when recording!
Sounds a bit like a DnB version of a bad gameboy soundtrack or something. Sorry. Not good at all.
1/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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