 samurai - Temporary Ephiphany (instrumental) |
samurai 
Cool Tourist
Registration Date: 21-11-2002
Posts: 45
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Please check out my new track 'Temporary Ephiphany (instrumental)' and post your comments here!!!
first tune i've sort of finished in a loooong time
i'm about to add vocal samples (not necessarily lyrics) but that will come in time. for now, the instrumental...
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21-11-2004 23:49 |
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jfry
Producer
Registration Date: 07-11-2004
Posts: 28
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Very nice track...its simple but rich...your bassline is nice and clear it fits well....the background keyboard is cool but it sounds a little to techy..robotish...maybe try a different style. Good track.
JFRY
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22-11-2004 04:15 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
Posts: 11,238
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Very simple but nice track.
Drums could use a slight boost though. And a bit more variation
3.25/5
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22-11-2004 20:46 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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mellow..
real nice set of melodies
the beat does struggle to maintain the same volume as the synths and bass
nice additional sounds later on in the track
some great pionts but u get a little bored waiting for them
keep at it
2/5
G
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24-11-2004 17:34 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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put a quick limiter on the drums.
nice kick on there.
very organix track.
so what makes this track stand out? hmm, nothing really. you need a hook in there, something cool that you remember in the song. you got generic pads, genric bass, generic pipes, generic drums.
i mean there cool but not like there's a catchy melody, or anything. i guess with vocals that's all you need.
nice downtempo
it's spelt epiphany
good work.
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