jfry 
Producer
Registration Date: 07-11-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Champane Dreams' and post your comments here!!!
I quickly made this one...just threw together a few other things i was working on...i'm not even sure if i like it...but this is all for fun anyway. Its made in acid..it took about 3hours. Thanks to all for the comments on The Osprey...helpful and inspiring.
JFRY
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20-11-2004 23:56 |
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marisol
Steppa
Registration Date: 23-09-2004
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nice party vibe on the intro. theres a bit of digital clipping with the crowd, try high passing the crowd and the guitar samples at around 250hz. that should buy you some headroom. if you have a sequencer try to produce a b line to follow the guitar riff and youll have a fun little track.
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21-11-2004 16:21 |
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muphasta
Master Producer
Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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have a bit a feel that the kick is loud or too much low shelf. like the poppy santa monica beachparty sound. to bad i have a bit of a bad download. sounds real nice. guitare's yours playing??????? hard to revieuw. think i liike it but have bad sound quality pitty.
not gonna rate this one
cheers
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muphasta none dnb
www.myspace.com/muphsugar
reggeadubwise.com
Roots-reggea-project: muphsteppa
muphsteppa@reggeadubwise
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22-11-2004 11:46 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Vorume of the track kinda varies a lot. Strange.
Not too fond of this style.
The switching of themes is done quite lame, try making the transitions more intresting mate.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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22-11-2004 20:21 |
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jfry
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22-11-2004 20:51 |
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Surya
The Robot
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Well, sorry if we sound very negative, but it's hard to say something positive when you don't like anything about a track. Not even technically...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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22-11-2004 20:54 |
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stickbubbly
mad man
Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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indeed you can hear the loops but your just learning. I did the same thing at first. The general idea of the track is really good.it has good atmosphere.
keep it up!!!
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22-11-2004 23:48 |
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jfry
Producer
Registration Date: 07-11-2004
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No, i appreciate the comments...if you didnt say so...then no one would ever learn. I will try to take everything from the posts and make a better track....i just dont really know what the f*@K i'm doing right now But it is fun so far!
Cheers
JFRY
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