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kareem kareem is a male
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4 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 6.50

Please check out my new track 'Paradise Elite' and post your comments here!!!

Totally chill song .
Tell me what you think about it.
20-11-2004 20:16 Homepage of kareem
marine289 marine289 is a male
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Some good parts, some bad.
Drums are good, although I would have used other samples.
Bassline is a bit boring, and could be a lot better.
I didnt like the birdsounds that much, but that's personal. Well, some effects that come by sometimes are really good, I really liked that.
But the bassline is your major 'problem' in this song.
You should change the bass, and also add some more variation to it.

2.5/5

This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by marine289: 21-11-2004 17:27.
21-11-2004 17:26
kareem kareem is a male
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Thanks for the comment.
I agree on the choice of samples for the drums, that needs to change.
But the birds are , what I think, the main thing that makes the song chill.

Feel free to put more comment.I'm here to learn.
21-11-2004 18:06 Homepage of kareem
janverstichel janverstichel is a male
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I like the birds very mutch
and the bassline is cool
beat could be better but it's ok
3.5/5
good job

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21-11-2004 20:50
Surora23 Surora23 is a male
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this sounds like video games breaks you heard in sega games...im not feelin this...and that wistle gets realyl annoying...the breaks are good but just not with those sounds...the first break is nice...but again that wistle is anoying IMO...sorry not feeling thsi at all...there needs to be some work with the mixdown and its just really empty...needs a lot of work imo...

2/5

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21-11-2004 22:18
Jeller Jeller is a male
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chill song, birds are nice but mayb a bit too much used
beat is good
3/5

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21-11-2004 22:21
Surya Surya is a male
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A bit slow for DnB, no?

Drums are quite good, but they could use a bit more punch.

You kinda lack a decent bassline.

I can hear some standard FL samples in there. Don't use those. Everyone knows they're from FL and most of us are tired of them. Above that: they're not that good, especially for DnB.

The bird thing is original and kinda funny, but it gets boring really fast.

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22-11-2004 20:17 Homepage of Surya
peet
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9 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 3.33

get your sounds together it could be a midi song.

1/5

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22-11-2004 20:31 Homepage of peet
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