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kareem kareem is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Potential (Preview)' and post your comments here!!!

Made in fruity loops.
Not a finished project, but decided to put it on the site to get some advice and comments.
Every comment is welcome
19-11-2004 19:45 Homepage of kareem
janverstichel janverstichel is a male
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yooo
youre snares are way to loud Evil
intro isn't great
but the rest is ok Bigup

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20-11-2004 01:56
muphasta muphasta is a male
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WWL.

theme and melody is ok. U need to put more variation in the beats. some sounds and noises should be louder other more quiet. nice drop but there goes the beat again in the same line. the rather minimalistic sound is not my taste. beats need variation!!!!! work with the basses and noises. program them, use filters and other effects. its a good base but you need to complete it. check it on several soundsystems too.
2/5

cheers

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20-11-2004 12:55
Jeller Jeller is a male
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good song, ur best one until now, only bad thing is that the tunes look to childisch sometimes
3/5

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20-11-2004 14:32
Surya Surya is a male
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Again very synthetic sounds and all
Hoover is a nice touch though.
Drums are OK, but snare could use some layering.

2/5

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22-11-2004 13:32 Homepage of Surya
Glim Glim is a male
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production of track is too loud mate

feel like i'm in a computer game at times
maybe a bit slower!
the synths dont do the beat justice both are out of sync volume wise
2/5
i use fruity too mate , drop me a line we might be able to help eachother out

laterz

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23-11-2004 22:37
marine289 marine289 is a male
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Dont really like the intro, you should work on that. I like it when the beat drops in. I feel like the bassdrum is a little too loud, and the snare a little too soft.
I dont really like some of the melodies, but that's just me.
Bassline could be better, less digital.
I like the drop at 2:32, really nice effect before it drops.
Track get's a bit boring sometimes, you nee more variation in your melodies and beats.

I'll check the final version too, hope you made something really good out of it. Bigup
for now: 1.75/5
24-11-2004 16:14
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