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janverstichel 
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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Please check out my new track 'sunday 11pm' and post your comments here!!!
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19-11-2004 18:23 |
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marine289
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Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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A lot better then the other tracks, it has some pretty cool effects in it. Drums are okay too (btw: nice ghost snares 
). And the basslines are well done, I know you have difficulties making them, but it sounded okay. Could use some more variation though.
The samples are the biggest con's. I know you only use the samples that are in fruity loops. There are some great samplepacks on this site. Download them!! 
The stuff at 1:28 with the bass is some good variation, only it doesnt fit the track.
But the track needs some variation, its just too much of the same.
You made some good progress overall. 
2.5/5
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19-11-2004 18:44 |
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muphasta
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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progress there is!!! production is better even got some nice soft mode!! good. there are still some sounds that need more work. the key word is to astonish everybody so thats in variation. variate in beats, style, chords moods, anything. it needs an aaaaaahhhhhh effect. its nice and clean but expand it know.
but your a quick learner i guess!!
2,5/5
cheers
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19-11-2004 18:52 |
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kareem
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Sounds alot better.Very chill song
The beats are nice and the tunes are very spacy.
Though there's not much variation.I like the cool little spacy sounds that come once and a while.
Good job.3.5/5
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20-11-2004 11:02 |
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janverstichel
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thx marine for the tips that you gave me one gostsnares and effects
DM
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20-11-2004 13:52 |
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Surya
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Drums are quite good, but kick needs a boost and snare could use some layering.
I was wondering though: why are your hats hard right?
Bassline needs work (soundwise) and a boost.
The sweeping effects are too loud.
Some nice pads and stuff, but not very intresting track.
2/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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22-11-2004 13:29 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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lively... nice clear beatz, maybe a bit trebly??
u clearly have the ability to construct the correct structure of a dnb track but ur choice of bass an synth leaves much to the imagination..
definetly ends up on an overall 'intelligent' tip.
keep at tit
Glimmer
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23-11-2004 17:48 |
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Airfull
Sexy Lady
Registration Date: 09-11-2002
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nice cooling down track!!
it's makes me think on a lounge(place)...
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ONE BULLET? TWO BULLETS? THE THIRT ONE IS THROUGH MY HEAD!
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23-11-2004 21:41 |
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T.O.R.
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Registration Date: 17-11-2004
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23-11-2004 21:50 |
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