PaperWall 
Producer
Registration Date: 15-10-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Chill Lounge' and post your comments here!!!
Here a relax D&b Track let urself flow
im still working on it
Please giv a revieuw after listening
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17-11-2004 23:45 |
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Soi
Super Moderator
Registration Date: 29-01-2003
Posts: 1,417
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Very nice intro, i like birdies a lot, you put my mind in summertime again, thank you for that.
Beat drops in: nice'n'groovy (maybe keep that robotic ta-ta-ta-ta from the snares out of it)
A little variation or extra sound after the 8th bar could be useful here.
i'd say: try to get more variation in it, but DON'T alter the pieces you have, it's vibe is spinechillingly beatiful.
Just add some extra chorus or something.
The snapped beats at the end could be better.
I love the vibe.
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"I'm not under the alkafluence of inkahol that some thinkle peep I am.
It's just the drunker I sit here the longer I get."
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18-11-2004 13:25 |
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roymorris
Newbie
Registration Date: 18-11-2004
Posts: 7
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Absolute stormer M8! Liking the bassline! It's on the iPod and getting caned!
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18-11-2004 18:53 |
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jfry
Producer
Registration Date: 07-11-2004
Posts: 28
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Fantastic jazz vibe...im a fan of jazzy tunes. Very nice combo of melodies and background. I like that live drum sound and the basslilne. Definately something to sit back with and chill. The intro is very nice but i think its a bit long.
JFRY
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21-11-2004 19:42 |
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Jeller
Producer
Registration Date: 11-11-2004
Posts: 79
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I like the build up very much, good tunes, nice beat but sometimes a bit too monotone
3.5/5
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21-11-2004 22:18 |
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samurai
Cool Tourist
Registration Date: 21-11-2002
Posts: 45
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ooh intro is sick, in a We Enter (aphrodite) sort of way!!! i like the bird sounds and such
i dunno about that clicking noise to keep time, theres gotta be something better to put there, like a hi-hat or something
little saxophone stab is a nice touch 
the pad is beautiful
i dunno about the drum kit either, the snare is a bit too harsh for the intro (and pads) of this track (i think this one comes from DOA packs?)
ooh the hammo type organ pad that comes in is sweeeeet, i love that sound
again i just dunno about the harshness of that snare
but NICE programming at 4:00!
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22-11-2004 00:02 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Too jazzy and stuff for my taste, but well made. Liking the drumkit.
It does get a bit repetetive after a few minutes though.
3.5/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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22-11-2004 13:10 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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real nice morcheba style intro reminds me of good times man, nice one...
i would prefer it faster however thats not really a producing error!!!
i like the bass, i'm a bit of a newbie on terms for thigs an i dunno wot u call it but i like it
great strings in the backround
i could fall asleep to this track
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