kareem 
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Residence' and post your comments here!!!
Also made in FL Studio.Every commment is welcome.
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17-11-2004 22:21 |
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T.O.R.
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Registration Date: 17-11-2004
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Its a good song, i like the style.
But the bass thet starts at 2:25 is a little bit strange, and i don't like that part (taste?).
Anyway, keep doin' that shizzle.
big up.
4/5
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17-11-2004 22:28 |
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Soi
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Registration Date: 29-01-2003
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Salaam Alekhoum!
I get the idea where you want to go with this track.
But..
Drumline is quite ok (except when it drops in, there is some bizar little arythmic thing happening), later on in the song your straightforward drumlline is as it should be.
The melody could be nice but, dude , they sound like they're from a Nintendo game or something : so filter, filter, modulate and modulate again till you have the screaming beasts you're looking for. They're somewhere in your computer, i know...
There's a strong drive/vibe in your track but modulate those melodies, i beg you.
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my tunes
"I'm not under the alkafluence of inkahol that some thinkle peep I am.
It's just the drunker I sit here the longer I get."
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18-11-2004 13:17 |
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muphasta
Master Producer
Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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too mechanical kraftwerk for me. cant stand the lo fi sounds. sorry. kick pushes a lot true wow! the idea is good but you gotta work with the sounds more. i like the construction of the beats. but you need to do some levelling. it has kind a funny feel because of the lo fi sounds but nnnnnnooot my taste.
2/5
cheers
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muphasta none dnb
www.myspace.com/muphsugar
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18-11-2004 16:07 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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The guys above are right: the beats are quite good, but your sounds and melodies are... quite crappy to be honest. It all sounds very synthetic and stuff. Play with filters to fuck up your sounds instead of using these lame patches as they are. No offence intended.
The distorted bassline is a bit better, but the distortion sound very digital too.
Overall the track is overcompressed too and recorded a bit too loud.
1.5/5. Sorry
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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22-11-2004 12:45 |
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