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janverstichel 
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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Please check out my new track 'deal with this' and post your comments here!!!
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17-11-2004 18:19 |
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kareem
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Nice melody, the harp sounds cool.
Beat is good but it never changes.
Vocals fit the song greatly.
The main vibes of the song aren't that interesting due to lack of variation i THINK.
3.5/5
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17-11-2004 18:59 |
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marine289
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Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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Okay, here's what i got to say.
Intro not so nice, could be a bit better. Vocals fit the track pretty good. Interesting beat, although could use some variation and ghost snares to keep it rolling (look it up, there's a topic about this somewhere on this forum). The 'acoustic guitar' or whatever it is, sounds very familiar, i think you got that from the 'Cool stuff' section from FL studio, right?? 
You could do something with it, but dont just copy the whole thing. The whole thing could use some EQing, but im not really sure about that, since I have only just started a few months ago. The outro is also missing, work on that.
Im sorry I didnt like it, but this isnt exactly my style. I would like to hear it when you have changed the song, or made another one, though.
1.75/5
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17-11-2004 20:02 |
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Jeller
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Registration Date: 11-11-2004
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Originally posted by marine289
Okay, here's what i got to say.
Intro not so nice, could be a bit better. Vocals fit the track pretty good. Interesting beat, although could use some variation and ghost snares to keep it rolling (look it up, there's a topic about this somewhere on this forum). The 'acoustic guitar' or whatever it is, sounds very familiar, i think you got that from the 'Cool stuff' section from FL studio, right??
You could do something with it, but dont just copy the whole thing. The whole thing could use some EQing, but im not really sure about that, since I have only just started a few months ago. The outro is also missing, work on that.
Im sorry I didnt like it, but this isnt exactly my style. I would like to hear it when you have changed the song, or made another one, though.
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wow u recognise this ?
u are good 
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17-11-2004 22:22 |
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janverstichel
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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jeah marine youre wright i did steal it , i find it a cool melody but is wrong of me to put it on the site
srr
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17-11-2004 22:25 |
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T.O.R.
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Registration Date: 17-11-2004
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Lets check it out.
For me is the intro ok.
But the song gets me bored (do i wright it right?)
this ain't really my style.
But its a good song.
2,5/5
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17-11-2004 22:32 |
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Surya
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Intro is ok, nothing spectacular. Like that high synth.
Where did you get the vocals? They sound quite good, but a bit too loud imo.
Awtch, that kick is too loud, too deep and too distorted! Snare could use some more snap. And some ghosthits.
Harp sounds quite good, but erm... doesn't do it for me to be honest.
Bassline needs more bass and more sub.
Gets a bit boring towards the end too, it's the same stuff the whole time, with no intresting variations.
Sorry bro, don't think this is very good...
1.5/5
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