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tommy87 
Producer
Registration Date: 15-05-2004
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Please check out my new track 'back in the day' and post your comments here!!!
If you're gettin anoyed wiv my incredibly poor attempts at producing dnb, just ignore me - I dont pretend even for one second tht im anything on some of the talented users here, It's just very useful to get some feedback on what I am doing and how to improve my tracks
What can i do to make my bass, and synths sound "cooler" and more pro - how can i make better drums? Where can i get better samples from?
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16-11-2004 22:18 |
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janverstichel
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 10-11-2004
Posts: 189
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beat is week in the beginning but fixes out well
melodie far too simple
2/5
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16-11-2004 22:23 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
Posts: 11,238
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What's up with the organ sounds every time? Do you work in a church or what? J/K offcourse, but organ sounds and DnB just don't mix man. Sounds crap.
You worked quite hard on the drums I guess, and they're quite nice. But they do need a boost.
Melodies and stuff are very melancholic...
1.5/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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17-11-2004 18:23 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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rather simple synth at play
snares need variation and more volume,
maybe make the ghost snare more quiet and give the bassline some direction as it becomes the downfall of the track
keep at it
2/5
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23-11-2004 23:29 |
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azmir
Newbie
Registration Date: 21-01-2005
Posts: 1
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its a good song but the beginn should be a little bit smaller
very good
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11-02-2005 09:41 |
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