janverstichel 
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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Please check out my new track 'plaza' and post your comments here!!!
made with fruity loops
hope you like it
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16-11-2004 18:40 |
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Jeller
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Registration Date: 11-11-2004
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nice rave and tune but the beat could be a little heavyier 3/5
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16-11-2004 18:46 |
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kareem
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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Nice beats, just not too excited about the glitches. 
Like the bass on 1min20.
The piano is cool but it get's boring after a while.
Not a lot of variation in the song but it sounds funky. 
3.5/5
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16-11-2004 18:52 |
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muphasta
Master Producer
Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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cool beat intro. dont like the piano that much. vocs cool too. bass should be deeper cut the high more. cool sound . the bass sound at 1.25 is a bit too lo fi. try filter it realtime. maybe try and use some lower notes on the piano too. to make it sound grander like a grand piano and not like a synth-one. breaks are maybe a bit too sharp too cut some high too. the bass kick is bit flat on the other hand.
like you do your beats as much work does the other sounds conntain. it looks to me you put a lot of work in the breaks but less in the othersounds. its nice but it doesnt come out of the same pot for me. it needs a bit of variation. ad more soundccapes and atmosphere's. work on the basses and will be a lot better!!!
2,5/5
cheers
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muphasta none dnb
www.myspace.com/muphsugar
reggeadubwise.com
Roots-reggea-project: muphsteppa
muphsteppa@reggeadubwise
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17-11-2004 12:27 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Beats are nice, but cut up that loop for more variations!
The farting in the pillow bassline is nice but needs a boost and more bass. The other bassline isn't that good though, and it's out of key with the piano.
Overall the track is very empty and made with too little elements. That's why it gets boring fast.
1.75/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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