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Rollin, like it so far. the worst thing about mp3s is you get a kind of phasing sound sometimes, and this seems to suffer from it a little, but thats not your fault. vocals work really well with the bass, reminds of a kind of more traditional style of songwriting, more based around the singing.
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16-11-2004 02:24 |
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muphasta
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vocs yours?
very moody, nice building-up. bit experimental Tom Yorcke or something.some high atmo in the back could be a bit louder around 2.30. sounds a bit messy with the uprising sound. maybe chop it some more or delay wise. nice and tight tough the rest. maybe heavien the snare or pitch it down abit at the last drop. uprising sound is too accentuated! nice twist at the end. and a clean nice ending is needed in such a mood!!!!
its very good but maybe it needs a chord switch in some part!
4/5
cheers
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16-11-2004 12:09 |
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BZU
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very nice track mate, I really enjoy this one
this is quality stuff
what I look at the most with these "vocals included" tracks is: nice sync between the DnB n vocals ? this aspect gets a yeah :p
vocals don't disturb the DnB ? no they don't :f
VERY nice Muse-style vocals ... could it be they're from Muse ?
VERY nice mix of sounds you used, (although I don't know anything bout what high-hats are, snares.... bleh bleh I suck at that...) VERY nice indeed.
definately one of my favs mate...
I can't judge in professional therms, but my appreciation is like: YEAH baby YEAH
btw: you used a sample from Fierce Alien Girl... right ?
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16-11-2004 20:04 |
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Surora23
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intro is sick...LOVE THE VOCALS!..
im like AHH...cant wait to hear the finished work...
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16-11-2004 22:47 |
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amperror
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snare is way to soft...cool sounds...strange eq on voice (can't understand lyrics (if it has to?)) but cool fx...yes really, drums need a boost...phasing kind of boring....good timed drops....
yeah man, great done, your tracks aren't bad, only sound adjustement needs a lot of work (try some good headphones sometimes)
3,8/5 for this one
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16-11-2004 23:17 |
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BZU
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17-11-2004 13:38 |
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Surya
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Nice track, but it still needs a lot of work on the levels.
Snare could use more punch and snappyness.
Your basslines are cool but you need to reEQ them to more effectively fill up the track.
Vocal is a bit too loud imo.
It would be nice to have something else than the atmospherics to fill up the mid part next to the vocals, coz it sounds a bit empty now.
Oh yeah, there's an unwanted annoying frequency @ 18khz or something. Filter it out.
With a little more work this could be a very, very nice track.
3/5 for now
2/5 for the levels and EQ
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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17-11-2004 18:00 |
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ERRR....DUH, UMMM, WAKE UP BRAINS!!!!! FOR U TO UPLOAD THIS TUNE TO THE WEBSITE IT WOULD NEED TO BE AN MP3??? NO???? MOST MP3S SUFFER A LITTLE FROM PHASING PROBLEMS BECAUSE OF THE WAY THEY ARE CONVERTED!!!!! THAT WAS MY POINT, MAYBE YOU SHOULD HAVE YOUR EARS CLEANED OUT IF YOU THINK MP3S ARE GOOD QUALITY!!!
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17-11-2004 19:09 |
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spudleyq
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Originally posted by utter muppet
ERRR....DUH, UMMM, WAKE UP BRAINS!!!!! FOR U TO UPLOAD THIS TUNE TO THE WEBSITE IT WOULD NEED TO BE AN MP3??? NO???? MOST MP3S SUFFER A LITTLE FROM PHASING PROBLEMS BECAUSE OF THE WAY THEY ARE CONVERTED!!!!! THAT WAS MY POINT, MAYBE YOU SHOULD HAVE YOUR EARS CLEANED OUT IF YOU THINK MP3S ARE GOOD QUALITY!!!
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a 320Kbps at 96Khz mp3 is actually very good quality.....certainly not the best......but the only time you get "phasing" as you guys like to call it on an mp3 is when you have low quality mp3's.....so calm down utter muppet man......this is a good track though......i'm only listening on some shitty phones so i can't judge the freqs properly......but as for the levels......the snare sounds kinda loud.......really snappy though.....like a breakneck snare!!!
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17-11-2004 19:33 |
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Dj Kush
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i do know m8......
i thought yopu was on about the Distortion in the track...
I have only listened in WAVE...
Anyway peace out
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17-11-2004 20:11 |
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cey
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nice track, check the levels towards the end thou, soundz like uve just turned everything up to try and create a bit of eessh da. no offence but i dont like the vocalz, just ma styleé mind, although i can c wot ure sayin man, like the amens
eZ duzzit+
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18-11-2004 23:35 |
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BZU
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still rinsing it out mate, I play yr trakk at least 5 times a day, and I start with it in the morning
c above, please answer my questions...
It's about confirming my knowledge or enhancing it.
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21-11-2004 11:02 |
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Bidness
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"what does my head in is HOW people can download your track & NOT give anykinda response...even if its 10 words"
Ok.... I'll respond.
I dont like it.
Beat is way to simple. Kick dusnt have enough punch. Snare is nice.
Dont like the bass sound. It fades in & out.
I like the idea of the vocals, but not the execution.
Production is pretty good, just not big on the ideas.
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23-11-2004 05:48 |
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Dj Kush
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Sorry M8 wrong place... but i get what you mean...
Nice samples in hat tune.. Just need tweaking....
Peace Dj Kush
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23-11-2004 13:52 |
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