 kareem - Fast at Last |
kareem 
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Fast at Last' and post your comments here!!!
It's a simple tune,but it's catchy and I wanted you to here it.
Any comment is welcome;also on some other songs of mine.
I'm here to learn.
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15-11-2004 23:32 |
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muphasta
Master Producer
Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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this is a bit the same as the other one. the filtered bass sound isnt just that. it all sounds very lofi which could be cool in a kind of way. leveling s a bit better. man you must manipulate the sounds play with them. use distortion filter that distortion be creative. these are good base too work out but this is finished for about 30%.
strange creepy approach.
2/5
cheers
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muphasta none dnb
www.myspace.com/muphsugar
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Roots-reggea-project: muphsteppa
muphsteppa@reggeadubwise
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16-11-2004 12:00 |
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Jeller
Producer
Registration Date: 11-11-2004
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yeah but it's made with fl demo so he couldn't edit it :s
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Jeller
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16-11-2004 16:47 |
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T.O.R.
Cool Tourist
Registration Date: 17-11-2004
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It's realy not bad, but i told you what I think about it.
Anyway, i think i'll go for 2/5
Good luck
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17-11-2004 17:24 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Kick kicks, which is good. Snare is snappy, which is good. Now add some punch to the snare. Hats are too loud.
Sounds and melodies are a bit lame again... sorry.
Bass needs more bass (there is almost none present).
Levels are off again. Melodies are completely overpowered by the beats. Kick is way too loud.
1.25/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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17-11-2004 17:50 |
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zebediah
is deep in the jungle
Registration Date: 08-10-2004
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I agree with what Surya says. Whatever FL Demo is ... it's holdin ya back. It's time 2 switch programs if the one you're using doesn't let you edit.
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Let the bass kick!!
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17-11-2004 17:57 |
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Airfull
Sexy Lady
Registration Date: 09-11-2002
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it sounds really unproffesional!!
but hey, no prob, that's what u said to, ur here to learn!!
I guess everything has been said....
I don't no if this word is correct
but it's to punchy!!!
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ONE BULLET? TWO BULLETS? THE THIRT ONE IS THROUGH MY HEAD!
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29-11-2004 22:44 |
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