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kareem kareem is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Rage of Riffs' and post your comments here!!!

15-11-2004 18:44 Homepage of kareem
Surya Surya is a male
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Really punchy drums, but ultradark is right: the kick is too loud. The snare needs a boost too.

Melodies are a bit dull imo

Your basslines have almost no bass at all. Work on that.

Not really feeling this. Your sounds are very synthetic and the melodies are not that great. Gets boring quite fast too...

Sounds like a track quickly slapped together in Fruity...

No offence, but this is what I think when I hear this track.

1/5

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17-11-2004 17:16 Homepage of Surya
T.O.R. T.O.R. is a male
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I don't really like this one.

Sorry, but it's a bit chaotic.

Anyway, keep it going.

2/5

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17-11-2004 17:27
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Whoa. Lots of variation and some strange little melodys goin on. Sounds like it needs a few more late nights of tweaking. Maybe an oldskool break layerd on top of some different hits. Not feelin this one, but definitely could see your style blossom up into a beautiful flower.

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17-11-2004 17:36 Homepage of zebediah
janverstichel janverstichel is a male
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i also think the kick is too loud there isn't much structure
but it has a happy vibe and that's a good thing
melodie is funny
2/5
goeie kareem blijve goan

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17-11-2004 17:59
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