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tommy87 
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Registration Date: 15-05-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Like Rain' and post your comments here!!!
Ez, I'm still producing well learning too - gimme some opinions on this. Have I improved, do you feel it? What can i do to improve my tunes? Thanks
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15-11-2004 17:59 |
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muphasta
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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nice sub in the intro dont like ht e other sound. the vocs are realy cool. nice sub again but bit loud now or too much low cut it back at a 100. it needs some more for completeness. beats are too dull. it looks too me you have some good ideas but you're def in need of a EQ-ing course. experiment on eq. check it on spectral analyzers lie 'inspector' or something then hear every sound seperately. then all together make sure no sound interfere's with another. but like i said nice ideas!!
2,5/5
cheers
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15-11-2004 18:28 |
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marisol
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woa you made a breeze in my studio when that sub kicked in full(thought my window was open). its distorting big time, lower the output on that sub for sure also use some compression on the snare and high end percusion elements. you got some good sounds and the structure is solid just get your mix a bit tighter. try not to use any boost on the eq just use subtractive eqing. 
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15-11-2004 18:50 |
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zebediah
is deep in the jungle
Registration Date: 08-10-2004
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Really feeling the strings and the keys with the port. Those vocals that come in once in a while are pretty cool. This reminds me a bit of John B's electro tinged stuff. Are you influenced by him? The bassline is nice but like what was said before ... it's way 2 huge!!!! Jeeeez!!! The wind iz a blowin! Very cool (the song + the wind). Finish this bizatch.
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Let the bass kick!!
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15-11-2004 19:01 |
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tommy87
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Registration Date: 15-05-2004
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heheeh wow all the time ive spend listening to dnb has paid off.
I'm not influenced by john b at all - im mainly influenced by future prophecies, ed rush and optical, calibre and pendulum.... although I try not to copy any of them and just learn from their stuff
Gunna look around for eq info and keep working, thanks for the comments!!! I'll make sure to keep producing lol
ez!
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15-11-2004 19:07 |
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@1$-)
unregistered
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i like the idea but you need to toughen those beats up, and vary them a little with some fills. the others got the jon b thing right. vocals are quite cool to!
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15-11-2004 22:09 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Drums need quite a boost and more hi-end
Bassline overpowers everything, turn it down a bit.
Nice pads and stuff.
Vocals are quite cool.
Gets a bit boring towards the end though
Has potential, but does need a lot of work.
2.25/5 for the track
1.5/5 for the levels
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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17-11-2004 17:19 |
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tommy87
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Registration Date: 15-05-2004
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cheers surya, gimme some links to sites which teach about eqin and stuff so i can improve if thts cool?
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17-11-2004 17:25 |
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Surya
The Robot
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There's some info on that in the Producers Q&A on this site, and there are some links there too. Check it out!
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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17-11-2004 17:32 |
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