 stino - prisoncellphone |
stino 
Player
Registration Date: 13-07-2003
Posts: 308
 |
|
Please check out my new track 'prisoncellphone' and post your comments here!!!
please comment.
thx to djfreemc for hints
this is not yet the collaboration track
cheerz
__
www.myspace.com/stinomg
www.myspace.com/circlelogicband
|
|
|
15-11-2004 12:02 |
|
|
|
|
the music has a great mischievous efect very good bassline, I would adore to do a remix of that music, it is clear if you like my email it is spidersound@hotmail.com !!!!!!!!!!!!!
|
|
|
15-11-2004 14:42 |
|
|
Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
Posts: 11,238
Helpfulness rating:
|
|
Intro is nice.
Quite good sounds and themes. Make the sub a bit more punchy maybe.
A bit more stereo on the crunchpad would be nice too.
Kick kicks nicely, but I think it's a bit too loud in comparison to the snare.
From what my FFT tells me, you have a quite nice stereo image... but I can't hear it, which makes me think your bass is stereo. It shouldn't. Make it mono.
Maybe add some phatter sounding hars or a crisp ride, coz your hi-end is slightly lacking.
Works quite well, but sounds a bit empty at times.
3/5
__
"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
|
|
|
15-11-2004 14:58 |
|
|
stino
Player
Registration Date: 13-07-2003
Posts: 308
|
|
i'll remaster it
and i'll give the snare more high end
and btw the sub is out of tune.
distraction
but ...
you'll see
__
www.myspace.com/stinomg
www.myspace.com/circlelogicband
|
|
|
16-11-2004 15:06 |
|
|
Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
Posts: 11,238
Helpfulness rating:
|
|
|
|
10-12-2004 13:26 |
|
|
Capsacium
Producer
Registration Date: 11-02-2005
Posts: 30
Helpfulness rating:
|
|
|
I'd reccomend something more in you're main break (around 3'00 to 4'00) it sounds really dry. It would help to vary the drums a bit more, maybe add some more 'wet' sound to them. There were some cool sounding secondary melodies in there. Over all I think this one could use some cleaning.
|
|
|
15-02-2005 22:07 |
|
|
|
