 dj panik "realease me" (DNB track) |
djpanik 
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14-11-2004 14:28 |
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Surya
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Very teknoish sounds and stuff.
Drums need a boost. Hats are too loud though. Kick sounds a bit to "ploffy". Make it kick more. Boost the 80-90hz range
Very messy overall. Everything is always together with a lot of other stuff.
2.53: bassline coming in: sounds like a sampled Dave Akuma bassline if I'm not mistaken. Quite nice, but sounds really familiar.
Also: the drop of a DnB track does NOT come halfway. It comes shortly after the beginning (preferably somewhere between 1 and 2 minutes). Make the intro shorter.
Sub needs a boost.
Track gets a bit repetetive after this.
Not bad, but not very good either. I don't think you should work on it more though. I think you still have much to learn, so just make a coulple of other tracks, you'll get there eventually.
2/5
To put the track in the listen page, read the topic about that 
PS: it wouldn't hurt to do some reviews
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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14-11-2004 15:53 |
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djpanik
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ouch ! 2/5 ! 
"Very messy overall. Everything is always together with a lot of other stuff."
i haven't understood what do you want to mean ..
excuse me,i'm not english lol
the sub is made with a plug in that's not a sample
and that's my fourth track in DNB,i produce techno normally
thanks for your comment
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14-11-2004 16:21 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by djpanik
ouch ! 2/5 !
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That's like 6/10, not too bad now is it?
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14-11-2004 16:32 |
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djpanik
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14-11-2004 16:43 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by djpanik
2/5 = 4/10
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No, it's not like I'm bad at math or something. In fact I'm rather good at it 
But read what I wrote on this matter before:
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Nope, scores on /5 are different from /10
1/5=-5.5/10
2/5=6/10-7/10
3/5=7.5/10-8/10
4/5=9/10
5/5=10/10
It's not rocket science, but it's more something like that...
It comes from the fact that most tracks are good enough to get at least a 5/10 score. That would mean that you'd hardly have any tracks with a score between 2.5/5. That would also mean that you have only a difference from 2.5/5 to 5/5 for a rating from just good enough to exelent... which isn't very acurate. So that's why a score on 5 is done differently, to allow raters to give more acurate scores for at least 90% of the tracks.
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