Please check out my new track 'Jumpin' Twistah' and post your comments here!!!
OK, this time I set out to do something different from the previous tracks (which were either trancey or hard as shit). I wanted to do a nice pumpin, jumpy style, twisted and playfull, fun track. And this is what I came up with...
I know the intro is kinda stupid, but that's what I mean with playfull
I started with some rather simple step break, made that punchy and ended up layering a bunch of stuff over it again. Can't help it apparently... 4 basslines for you to shake to too.
Lemme know what ya fuckas think!
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
playfull? first sound s a bit metalmentalsickness. like it tough. nice subs. after break breaks get really cool. dont like the snare that much. aybe it isnt the snare but the way you use it. maybe try some velocities on it . like the wowowow bass! needs some hgigh contrastic atmosphere's. the wicked metalmenta sound is great. maybe delay it from time to time. bass at 4,25 bit louder. wowow
! basses get real cool tough should be bit more upfront. it needs something high.
cool bouncy end
hi
u plays alot with the rithem whats verry good
but i miss a heavy groove u know what i mean
the thin thats makes u move
but it can be the kind of style d&b
its al little bit simple
but well build up
basses sounding nice 2
go on grteetz paperwall
Robot tears thats what the intro reminds me of. kicks are a little heavier than normal, sounds good though. im not one for the real traditinal four beat rythem but you do good justice.... your break at about 1:47 -2:10 was suppa duppa tyte....
your synths are very clean, very nice. i have to say i enjoyed this not as much as i do the delayred snare stuff but still very tite. starts to get a bit boring as you go towards 4:00.
Tnx for the insights guys. I have to say this is my first try on something like this too
And yeah, it does get a bit repetetive after the second drop. But I guess this is one of those tunes DJ's only play the first drop and then quickly thorw in another tune
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
like the starter beat, although the bass could be raised it sounds lush against the beatz
one of the synths (cant work out which one) is too quiet for my liking
luvvin that wow wow bass at 2:06
if the track featured purley around that it would be perfect for my taste
when you have a succesion of snares form around the middle onwards they do sound trebly and take away the effect of the beat for a couple a seconds
4:26 displays sum clownstep style bass, that i jus love an in general - good variation something that alot of dnb tracks could do wit!!!
one day i'll be this good
overall it rocks
4/5
G
Really really impressive! The drum werk is fucki*g awesome ... something I look for in tunes when record shopping. Snare didn't bother me much. Possibly a little mixing issue: turn the bass up and the drums down. Nothing in this tune I didn't like.
A bit too repatative as stated before but that could be fixed with a few sprinkled samples here + there. You could even shorten the tune up. It's very minimal ... but "full" sounding which is my favorite formula.
The melody or riff in this tune is good but I think it's a little on the cheesy side. That could be fixed by changing 1 or 2 notes ... I mean ... it's just not as devious as it could be. It kinda downgrades the tune ... everything is very cutting edge except the riff ... it just kinda agrees with ya and passes ya by unlike all the other elements. I'm sure you could darken it up a wee bit without having 2 change the title of the tune.
Definite 10/10.
_________________ Let the bass Kick!!
First time listening I thought (me stupid !
)
it seems to be gettin repetitive (after 4:00 min)
but I’am still no regretting
listening this tune full version
over and over again! UHH!!!
quote:
Originally posted by Surya
But I guess this is one of those tunes DJ's only play the first drop and then quickly thorw in another tune
Still could be needing 'this', or 'that', but:
DON'T LET THEM WITHHOLD
those LUSTY
WICKED
BOUNCY
BEATZ ‘n’ BREAKZ
to da people, when used in da mix,
just by throwing in those other tunes too fast!!!
! basses get real cool tough should be bit more upfront. it needs something high.
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WICKED 
BOUNCY 
BEATZ ‘n’ BREAKZ 