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stickbubbly 
mad man
Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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the intro needs more atmosphere. and some more symbals. drop is very nice. wonky shit. i like it. it could use a few more variations, but for the most part its a nice track.
cheers 
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11-11-2004 23:23 |
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PaperWall
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Registration Date: 15-10-2004
Posts: 54
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hello i like the start at 1.29 m
i think the intro with the strings is to long maybe fill it up a little after +-1m
the flute is special in the song looks chineese
verry cool bass it maks a cool groove
at least the end can be cooler
good work
keep on going
greetz paperwall
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12-11-2004 15:55 |
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kareem
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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Cool song , real chill.
Nice beats and vibes.
What I liked most was the build up in the intro.
What I Didn't like was that it was really repetitive.
I'll rate your song for about 3.5/5.
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12-11-2004 17:41 |
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charleskoncept
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 29-09-2004
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oh come on all ready we got the point... This intro is really so overdone before..... 
the breakdown i think saves it though. reminds me of krusts "break ya neck" your snares need some more layering maybe something to offset them a bit. and after 2"45 of that bass line you start to get bored.... which is where i am now. the pipes are a very nice touch but they are a little drowned out by the bass line...
3/5
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12-11-2004 18:01 |
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janverstichel
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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style!
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12-11-2004 18:06 |
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Jeller
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Registration Date: 11-11-2004
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nice intro, really good, but after the intro the song stays the same over the whole line..
If it was less monotone it would be really good
3/5
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12-11-2004 18:37 |
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jfry
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Registration Date: 07-11-2004
Posts: 28
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like the intro. could add to it though. The track has got a nice flow...also the vocal sample is cool. maybe end the track with the vocal and the flute...over nice work
JFRY
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13-11-2004 19:59 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Not too fond of the oldskool style strings in the intro. Especially that melody doesn't do it for me.
Drop: works. Bassline does the trick, but it could use more sub, and the drums have a good drive. Maybe your hats are a bit too loud though.
Typical clownstep: repetetive drums and dito bassline. Small variations, then it goes on as it was, another small variation, than it goes on some more.
Not too fond of the Japanese (or whatever it is) dubbed movie interlude.
Not bad, but not my thing.
3/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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14-11-2004 12:49 |
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amperror
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Registration Date: 13-10-2004
Posts: 64
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TERRIBLE, those chinese flutes.
all the rest DELICIOUS.....!!!
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16-11-2004 23:23 |
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peet
Steppa
Registration Date: 31-01-2004
Posts: 264
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i finally have finished setting up my multi-os set up so now i have a seperate XP DAW, so ill be busy the next weeks finsihing this track up. im having the feeling its sound can still totally shift in unexpecting ways. so check it out when its there. hehe.
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