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amperror amperror is a male
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Please check out my new track 'krinimal (rush one)' and post your comments here!!!

This is my first preview (almost finished) the last part still needs some attitude.
>>any comment appreciated<<
09-11-2004 13:39 Homepage of amperror
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Beat is nicely layered with all the robotic office-noises.
Technically speaking it reminds me of some bizar german dnb-producers duo (can't find the name now), and even more technically speaking, this is no strict dnb, so interesting: it's more like a hiphop beat with emphasis on the hihats.
The haunted noises in the background are dope.
The organ-thingy, dunno yet.
Good idea, can use some working-out.

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09-11-2004 14:43 Homepage of Soi
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well......that's different....definitely not for the dance floor but good production!!

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09-11-2004 19:02 Homepage of spudleyq
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yeah, i like the style...
good start, buildup kinda slow, but speedin up-nicelySmile
you culd change the instrument ograns or how do you write it!
without it, everything is pretty, gr8
oh yeah, an the bass (is kinda to much simple and not very interestin, until you change it, then i like it)
nice
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10-11-2004 01:31 Homepage of Polar Freq
amperror amperror is a male
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thanx for the replies,
good advice about the (too easy) synth and bass tunes,
i will mess them up next time....
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10-11-2004 21:32 Homepage of amperror
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This reminds me of German engineering (panacea) very dark but not danceable. And definitly only spinnable in the living room. the layers are really nice which is a good change from everything else.....
maybe compress your snare down a bit more during your main parts its nice and snappy during your breakdowns which is nice.

3/5

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11-11-2004 22:40
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yeh man, cool start

maybe fetch another bass sound somewhere
keep it experimental like it is right now!

i like how the beats nicely do their own thing
almost organic

keep it up

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11-11-2004 23:24 Homepage of saphir
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already mailed you bout this one !! Bigup

cheers

3,5/5

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12-11-2004 12:14
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hi its a real free style track
not the most feeling full d&b track
i think its a little experimental
some of them parts are cool other are less
but its a special style
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12-11-2004 16:20
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The synth stab is a good idea but try finding a better sounding noise, its got a kind of tech step vibe which is cool, better than all this jump up crap everyone is buying right now, but id invest (or steal- check limewire) in some vsti (ok depends what software your running) something like absynth or reactor, crystal isnt a bad sounding synth and its free
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12-11-2004 22:39
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Most has been said already

Turn down the hihats a bit
Make the drums a bit punchyer
Give the bassline a boost, maybe distort it a bit Wink

Nice use of the amen.

Good start, but needs a LOT of work imo.

2/5

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13-11-2004 13:23 Homepage of Surya
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