 MOpKOBb - getting bread |
MOpKOBb 
Producer
Registration Date: 22-04-2003
Posts: 18
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Please check out my new track 'getting bread' and post your comments here!!!
euhm made with fruity loops...thanx for listening!! going to work on it again later, satisfied for now.
dai! what time is it actualy?
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08-11-2004 23:03 |
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muphasta
Master Producer
Registration Date: 29-06-2004
Posts: 643
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like the intro, very nice jungle. dont like th e low atmo - bass sound. snare much louder and play with the ride's ( pitch ???) need to uplevel some sounds. vocal is cool. some sub bass is recommended too. manipulate the skanking things with delays and feedback. you should stick too complex jungle riddims and dont go too frequently back to a jump-up beat. some sounds need to be heard specificly.
it has a strange musical-mood in it 
. can picture it being some mike oldfield shit at the end. strange one. I think levelling and some fine eq is the job to do for this one. maybe look for some variation in melody cause it sounds ppracticaly the same the whole song.
2,75/5
cheers
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muphasta none dnb
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08-11-2004 23:43 |
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Polar Freq
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Registration Date: 06-11-2004
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i like the instrument (not good with the names of instruments that are not in fruity samples)
iz gr8 idea 2 put that in.
change the drum rithm from time to time with some like more complex stuff. that'l be kool
a reel good one,
oh yeah, most important
THE SNARE MAN, THAt needz to be lauder and heavier (more distortion or smthn like that)
kould put some verb on da instruments ('cept the guitar thingey)
good
like 2 hear mor!
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09-11-2004 03:05 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Hmmm, leands and stuff aren't that intresting imo.
Drums are quite nice but the volume jumps a bit, try equaling it a bit...
A decent bassline would come in handy...
Dunno, not really feeling thisone. Sounds a bit like a DnB remix of a folksong or smth...
1.75/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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09-11-2004 23:00 |
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MOpKOBb
Producer
Registration Date: 22-04-2003
Posts: 18
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owkie...
ok i'm going to change some things like the low bass line, make it stronger fill it up with something and make some variations in rythm or melody of it... will make the snares a little more powerfull. won't make it more complex, 'cause it would be to much it think. some small changes maybe.
i like the melody, wanna keep it without other variations, because i think it's good for a flow... maybe gonna get some sounds come out more, not that good in mastering yet!!! big probleml. i like the build up and the atmo in the song so i'm going to try to leave it like that as much as i can.
hounestly i don't know if all reviews were objective enough to change to much!! but thanks!! some things are verry helpfull do!!!!
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10-11-2004 15:13 |
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amperror
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Registration Date: 13-10-2004
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mmmh, a quite subtle track
like the pizzicato sound but it repeats to much,
try to drop it.
boost da rythm and add sub,
they might be heard... 
It reminds me on a classic game.
...nice tetris n bass...
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11-11-2004 01:57 |
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