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This tune was born out of personal disapointment to the acceptance of Dead By Dawn by DNB forum headz. NO worries this one is strict to the DNB format. For all the DNB headz
enjoy
James
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=444478&T=3475
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08-11-2004 01:33 |
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Surya 
The Robot
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Vocal is quite cool
Drums are quite good but could use some more punch
Sub is too loud and offbeat. Maybe you need to edit the sample?
Like it a lot more than your previous track. It's also more of a real DnB track. But it's too empty. You have your drums, some effects and a sub. I think you'll have to add more to make it intresting.
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09-11-2004 22:47 |
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Steppa
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listen to it again, and tell whats off (specify at which time its off) and your remarks to make it better sounding.
thanks surya
james
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10-11-2004 03:17 |
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Surya
The Robot
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Well, your sub bassline is always a bit too late. I think there is a small gap of silence in the beginning of that sample or something...
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10-11-2004 10:55 |
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zebediah
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I just don't know what 2 say about this one. The bassline has no melody and
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It's very monotonous and doesn't seem 2 go any where. I could be wrong but it almost sounds like the drum loop is off a bit 2. Could be the compression from Acidplanet or something.
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10-11-2004 11:12 |
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Steppa
Registration Date: 25-07-2004
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working on it, timing wise, the drums aren't off i just introduce them at points in the tune before the 16th bar, but i will work on that, it gets on Mumblz nerves. and i added some delay to make the ROboitic tunes sound less well, robotic. tek infektion is helping with the bassline problem
ez
james
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