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jfry 
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Registration Date: 07-11-2004
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I think that this track needs a lot more behind it. if you added a little more depth, maybe a dark punchy bassline...and...maybe some vocals thrown in here and there. Sounds like older techy stuff. I think you have something to build on though...keep it comin. By the way..I'm new to producing...so I shutter to think what people will say about my tracks!
Cheers man
JFRY
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08-11-2004 00:26 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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like the intro a lot, but the snare could be more punchy...i dont particularry like the synth that comes in...it becomes really repetetive imo...break down comes in....i like the bass line, but i think it could use some distortion...(the track is a bit slow yeah?) it could use some ghost snares in there too....
i like old techy stuff, so this is decent to just lsiten to eveyrnow and then... keep it up...needs some work, but i see promise... 
2.5 3/5
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08-11-2004 01:27 |
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Polar Freq
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Registration Date: 06-11-2004
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Yep, the repetition bugz me 2.
Play a little more wit the drumz and kicks, coz you got the same ritm all the time.
put somekind of background, something to hold all the stuff.
did you go to some minimalist dnb or smthn??
keep it up!
DNB'z dominatin'
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08-11-2004 02:54 |
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muphasta
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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WWL.
reversed sound is cool sub needs to be deeper,maybe other sound, less blipping. arpegio is cool. nice how it goes the beats. more playing the beats or other loops in it, combinations of sounds are ok. produnction is ok too. more cymbals like some crashes and rides and also one at every 16th. the strikers mmmmm , dont like them. filter them too or use a nice fluid synth sound. strikers sound pretty cheap. sorry. sounds like you have a good base but i think your halfway and need to fill it withbreat-taking moods, delays and some reverbs. variate the beats and breakz and then it is finished! maybe try combinate different styles . start of with some hip-hop then Dnb then jungle then core but only just in the fourth count or some thing like that . i dont know!!!! just giving some ideas.
2,8/5for now
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08-11-2004 11:51 |
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spudleyq
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Registration Date: 23-09-2004
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it's been said........but it's repititious......which is cool sometimes......but not on the dancefloor.......it fits well together, but it's very minimal......not much for effects.....besides the flanging, reversing, and some reverb/echo in there.......keep at it though.....it takes time!!
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08-11-2004 19:41 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Hmmm, your snare sounds a bit... dunno... strangely EQed or something... And maybe the stereo image of it is too wide.
Hmmm, so, you got your drums and the acid sounds... gets a bit boring quite fast indeed, sorry. The concept of the track is, although not really bad, just not that intresting.
1.25/5
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09-11-2004 22:38 |
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saphir
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Registration Date: 15-11-2002
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