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Danny Jenk D-Pitch
Registration Date: 24-07-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Undecided Desirers' and post your comments here!!!
edit by thechronic:
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06-11-2004 09:35 |
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B-complex
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Registration Date: 07-04-2004
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D-pitch once again came back with a quality. Intro is nice and well made for mixing. Sounds sits nice in their frequency spectrum, they are nice and clean.. good work. Intro is little bit too long for my taste.. but finally there is breakdown in 2:19.. Nice drumfill take you into the main part of the song, where D, shows us some of his soundengineering techniques 
New break is added [i guess it's tramen or smth] it adds some crisp in highend spectrum. This really reminds me some of cartridge's tunes. Overall it's very good track worth to be released.
now some of my points .. it's just personal so .. it's subjective 
1. i don't like vocal sample, it's too repetetive
2. i miss some main idea, don't take me wrong, i miss this in lot of "pro" songs, but just something that makes you say wow
[don't know really how to explain it,]
3. you really know how to automate effects and play with sound. I just think it's too much sometimes.
my rating : 4.2/5 with respect 
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06-11-2004 11:52 |
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Polar Freq
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Registration Date: 06-11-2004
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i like the: from time to time wasper!
the singin' girl iz kinda , i dono, laggin' (there somethin negative bout that, sorry)
good ambient sounds and stuff
good build-up on three minutes
and i like the airplane crashing sound!
oh, that was actually outside my window, sorry
i concur that the voice is a little to much repetitive and kinda un-soulful
the drums are rollin' quite well
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06-11-2004 19:39 |
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charleskoncept
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Registration Date: 29-09-2004
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vocals<- not really my thing and for the most part i think they detract from a track, and this is one of those times.
- the the piano/organ<?> line reminds me of Final Fantasy video games. and thats a good thing. 
your amen is reall tight nice touch to a very dreamy kinda atmospheric main idea.
the break at 5:11 or so seems really clutttered IMO
but overall a very good track to get the crowds moving
4/5
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06-11-2004 20:41 |
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Soi
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Registration Date: 29-01-2003
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Ah man!!! Variety is the keyword, again.
It's ALL GOOD!!
except drums maybe: there's a lot of mids in it and as such on the verge of lacking that extra but 500% necessary punch. If they'd been a bit deeper, this track would KICK BOTTOMS BIGTIME!
Hell, i even almost like the female vocals.
Do i hear a Reson Stereo-plug in there?
The breaks are top, basses idem.
So much variation that the track is finished before you realize you actually started listening to it.
Ok, finished listening now: female vocals indeed a bit too much.
Superb track
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07-11-2004 19:01 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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really loving this intro....tthose vocals are relaly nice...snare and kick drop....(nice)...bass hits here and there sit relaly nice...this reminds me of a karl k kaos and jae kennedy track....very much my feel...
first break drops....loving those wobbly sound effects andbass hits...beat drops....really wasnt expecting the drums...a bit of a pitty cause i was expectinfg some hardstep influences...i really like the intro but for some the drum programming just wasnt doing it for me...its a good track, just not tomy feel...sorry...
3/5
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08-11-2004 01:41 |
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amperror
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Registration Date: 13-10-2004
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I'm really curious when reading comments...
.....now listening.....
mmmhhh...uptempo stuff....really nice done
massive baas snds >: o
..wow, a junglin' part2..
xllent sound control during whole track...
only a lack of some tricky rrrolzzz
xpert stuff overhere......4,3/5
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09-11-2004 12:27 |
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spudleyq
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Registration Date: 23-09-2004
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good production......bad vocals.......no one likes those vocals eh? keep it up though man......this is some quality shit.....intro kinda long......but if you're mixing it.......you can just skip past it!!! those vocals definitely don't fit with the track though.......off pitch.....off key......i hope you don't know the person who sang that cuz it's really bad!!
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09-11-2004 19:00 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro is nice indeed, but (also indeed) a bit too long. Nice bass teasers
Drums are nice n punchy.
Unfortunatly I have to agree with this too:
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those vocals definitely don't fit with the track though.......off pitch.....off key......i hope you don't know the person who sang that cuz it's really bad!! |
It's not nesseceraly bad, it's just not fit for this track I think. It is, indeed, extremely off key and it really messes up the entire track.
The track is really well made and all, but the vocal is so attention drawing that it's hard to enjoy it, since the vocal doesn't fit and is completely out of key.
This makes it hard to rate.
I'll give it a 3/5 since most of it is well done.
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09-11-2004 22:03 |
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Dj Kush
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Registration Date: 23-10-2004
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Exellent...!!
What do you want me 2 say m8...
Myself & a m8 had a good listen.... thought the Breaks used were fitting to the feel and Mood of this track....
So the beats complimented by well crafted sound manipulation... is kinda what i look for in tracks... this has had some major thought put into it,...
Why havent i seen you on any Major Labels..?
Peace...Dj Kush
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09-11-2004 22:09 |
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D-Pitch
Danny Jenk D-Pitch
Registration Date: 24-07-2004
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hey thanx fellas ill look into the vocals and the other problems listed and repost track 4 u.
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10-11-2004 16:44 |
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kareem
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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Nice tune, with a good vibe.
Voice matches great.
Good build-up at 3min00.
Nice!
3.5/5
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13-11-2004 18:24 |
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Danny Jenk D-Pitch
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18-11-2004 19:48 |
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zebediah
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Registration Date: 08-10-2004
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Not bad at all Junglist. Was hoping 4 something a bit different when it dropped but the amens 'n' edits iz tight. Huge bass!!!! Very professional sounding. Keep up the great werk.
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Let the bass kick!!
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18-11-2004 20:00 |
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